【題目】短文改錯(cuò)

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（╲）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

My soccer coach retired in last week. I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party. My mum makes the better biscuits in the world, so I decide to ask her for help. Mum taught me some basic step of baking. I insisted on doing most of the baking myself. I thought the biscuits were really well. My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor after I was packing them up.

At a party, my coach, with a biscuit in his mouth, asked surprisingly who made them and joked, “I might have to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits.”

My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter!

【答案】

【1】去掉in

【2】anything改為something

【3】better改為best

【4】decide改為decided

【5】step改為steps

【6】well改為good

【7】after改為when

【8】a改為the

【9】just和get之間加to

【10】enjoy改為enjoying

【解析】

【1】去掉in 考察介詞。 last week是時(shí)間狀語，表示“上周”的意思，其前不用使用介詞in，文意是我的足球教練在上周退休了。

【2】anything改為something考察不定代詞。anything表示“有些事情”，通常用在否定句中，而something通常用在肯定句中，文意是我想在他退休的聚會(huì)時(shí)候?yàn)樗鲆恍┨厥獾氖虑椤?/span>

【3】better改為best考察比較級(jí)。Best是better的最高級(jí)形式，表示“最好的”，文意是我媽媽會(huì)做世界上最好吃的餅干，有限定詞in the world所以應(yīng)該用最高級(jí)形式。

【4】decide改為decided考察過去時(shí)。文中時(shí)態(tài)在首句已經(jīng)點(diǎn)明，是last week上周，所以應(yīng)該用過去時(shí)decided，文意是我媽媽會(huì)做世界上最好吃的餅干，我決定向媽媽尋求幫助。

【5】step改為steps考察名詞復(fù)數(shù)形式。step是名詞表示“步驟”的意思，step前面有some修飾，所以應(yīng)該用名詞復(fù)數(shù)形式，文意是我媽媽告訴了我烘焙的幾個(gè)基本步驟。

【6】well改為good考察形容詞。good是形容詞表示“好的”，well是副詞形式，really是副詞形式，修飾動(dòng)詞或形容詞，所以應(yīng)該用good，文意是我覺得我做的餅干很好。

【7】after改為when 考察連詞。when表示“當(dāng)...時(shí)候”，文意是我唯一的錯(cuò)誤是當(dāng)我打包的時(shí)候，我掉在地板上了一些。

【8】a改為the考察冠詞。The是定冠詞，表示“特指”的意思，the特指我自己親手制作的餅干，文意是文意是在聚會(huì)上，教練拿起一塊餅干放在嘴里。

【9】just和get之間加to考察不定式。文意是文意是在聚會(huì)上，教練拿起一塊餅干放在嘴里，驚奇的文誰做的并開玩笑的說，我應(yīng)該明年再退休這樣就可以獲得更多的餅干。

【10】enjoy改為enjoying考察動(dòng)名詞。文意是我最喜歡的照片是在聚會(huì)上我和和教練高興地吃餅干。enjoying表示的是在當(dāng)時(shí)非常高興。

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