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12．假如你是學(xué)生會(huì)負(fù)責(zé)人，學(xué)校將在五月份與美國(guó)姊妹學(xué)校共同開展文化月活動(dòng)，校報(bào)急需在學(xué)校內(nèi)聘一位同學(xué)任英文版的編輯，請(qǐng)你用英文寫一則招聘啟事，并請(qǐng)感興趣的同學(xué)于4月31日前與學(xué)生會(huì)聯(lián)系．主要內(nèi)容如下：
1．主要工作：
①?gòu)挠⑽膱?bào)刊雜志及互聯(lián)網(wǎng)上選擇有關(guān)中西方文化的文章；
②選擇與編輯同學(xué)們的來(lái)稿．
2．應(yīng)聘要求：
①樂(lè)意奉獻(xiàn)出一些業(yè)余時(shí)間為同學(xué)們服務(wù)；
②英文與美術(shù)皆好；能熟練使用電腦．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
2．可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，以使充實(shí)、行文連貫，請(qǐng)勿提及真實(shí)學(xué)校名稱．

A Cultural Month activity will be carried out in May between our school and our sister school in the USA．So theschool newspaper is looking for an editor for its English edition．The job mainly includes two parts：One is to choose proper English articlesabout culturesof China and western countriesfrom other newspapers，magazines or Internet．The other is to pick out articles from those written by students in our school and edit them for use．
We hope that he/she could meet the following requirements：First，he/she is willing to devote some of his/her spare time to serving the others．Second，it's necessary for him/her to be good at both English and fine arts．Besides，the ability to use the computer is important．
Those who are interested in the job，please get in touch with the Students'Union before April 31st．
The Students'Union．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提綱作文．根據(jù)所提供的材料信息，寫一則招聘啟事，招聘一位同學(xué)任英文版的編輯，請(qǐng)感興趣的同學(xué)于4月31日前與學(xué)生會(huì)聯(lián)系．
寫作時(shí)人稱以第一人稱和第三為主，時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主．
寫作要點(diǎn)：1．主要工作：①?gòu)挠⑽膱?bào)刊雜志及互聯(lián)網(wǎng)上選擇有關(guān)中西方文化的文章；②選擇與編輯同學(xué)們的來(lái)稿．2．應(yīng)聘要求：①樂(lè)意奉獻(xiàn)出一些業(yè)余時(shí)間為同學(xué)們服務(wù)；②英文與美術(shù)皆好；能熟練使用電腦．

重要短語(yǔ)：carry out （實(shí)施），look for （尋找），pick out （挑選出），meet the requirements（滿足要求），be willing to do sth （愿意做某事），devote time to doing （致力于做某事），be good at（擅長(zhǎng)某事），the ability to do sth （做某事的能力…），be interested in （感興趣），get in touch with （聯(lián)系，接觸）．

【高分句型】
1．The other is to pick out articles from those written by students in our school and edit them for use．
此處是由過(guò)去分詞短語(yǔ)作后置定語(yǔ)，修飾代詞"those"．
2．Those who are interested in the job，please get in touch with the Students'Union before April 31st．
此處是由關(guān)系代詞"who"引導(dǎo)定語(yǔ)從句，"who"在從句中作主語(yǔ)，指代前面的先行詞"those"．

解答 A Cultural Month activity will be carried out in May between our school and our sister school in the USA．So the school newspaper is looking for an editor for its English edition．The job mainly includes two parts：One is to choose proper English articles about cultures of China and western countries from other newspapers，magazines or Internet．The other is to pick out articles from those written by students in our school and edit them for use．【高分句型】（主要工作：①?gòu)挠⑽膱?bào)刊雜志及互聯(lián)網(wǎng)上選擇有關(guān)中西方文化的文章；②選擇與編輯同學(xué)們的來(lái)稿）
We hope that he/she could meet the following requirements：First，he/she is willing to devote some of his/her spare time to serving the others．Second，it's necessary for him/her to be good at both English and fine arts．Besides，the ability to use the computer is important．（應(yīng)聘要求：①樂(lè)意奉獻(xiàn)出一些業(yè)余時(shí)間為同學(xué)們服務(wù)；②英文與美術(shù)皆好；能熟練使用電腦）
Those who are interested in the job，please get in touch with the Students'Union before April 31st．【高分句型】

點(diǎn)評(píng) 提綱作文在寫作時(shí)要注意內(nèi)容是否包含了所有要點(diǎn)．寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時(shí)需注意積累短語(yǔ)和重要句型．