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16．請你為《21^st Century》寫一篇報(bào)道，介紹我校為高三學(xué)生創(chuàng)立的"心靈城堡（Soul Castle）"專欄（column），并談?wù)勛约旱母邢耄?br />內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)包括：
1．開設(shè)目的：緩解壓力，確保健康      2．專欄優(yōu)勢：專業(yè)指導(dǎo)
3．專欄內(nèi)容：建議，心聲             4．你的感想
注意：
1．詞數(shù)120左右
2．開頭語已為你寫好（不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）
Our school has set up a column called"Soul Castle"for senior 3students．It is aimed at relieving pressure，and ensure the health of students．The column has the unique advantage that the experts in psychology can give us the expertise and guidance．（高分句型一）It covers the thoughts and feelings of students and the professional suggestions．
From my point of view，not only does our school attach importance to our study but also put our mental health at the top of the list．（高分句型二）It also provides a platform to communicate with our teachers and parents．Moreover，we can get help and guidance from professionals to solve our mental problems．With its help，we can take the College Entrance Examination with confidence．
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Answer 1

分析 本次作文要求為《21st Century》寫一篇報(bào)道，介紹我校為高三學(xué)生創(chuàng)立的"心靈城堡（Soul Castle）"專欄（column），并談?wù)勛约旱母邢耄�要點(diǎn)包括：1．開設(shè)目的：緩解壓力，確保健康 2．專欄優(yōu)勢：專業(yè)指導(dǎo)3．專欄內(nèi)容：建議，心聲 4．你的感想．故既要完成任務(wù)，又要兼顧形式的要求．
寫作亮點(diǎn)：本篇條理清楚，要點(diǎn)全面，結(jié)構(gòu)連貫．其句式上的變化既使得文章生動(dòng)而流暢，也體現(xiàn)了作者駕馭句式的能力．例如：定語從句that the experts in psychology can give us the expertise and guidance．倒裝句not only does our school attach importance to our study but also put our mental health at the top of the list．不定式的to communicate with，to solve our mental problems．的用法．a(chǎn)imed at，unique advantage，expertise and guidance，attach等詞匯及From my point of view，not only…but also，Moreover，With its help等連接詞．
The column has the unique advantage that the experts in psychology can give us the expertise and guidance．（高分句型一）
 From my point of view，not only does our school attach importance to our study but also put our mental health at the top of the list．（高分句型二）

解答       Our school has set up a column called"Soul Castle"for senior 3 students．It is aimed at relieving pressure，and ensure the health of students．The column has the unique advantage that the experts in psychology can give us the expertise and guidance．（高分句型一）It covers the thoughts and feelings of students and the professional suggestions．
      From my point of view，not only does our school attach importance to our study but also put our mental health at the top of the list．（高分句型二）It also provides a platform to communicate with our teachers and parents．Moreover，we can get help and guidance from professionals to solve our mental problems．With its help，we can take the College Entrance Examination with confidence．

點(diǎn)評 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．