Question

假若你是某高中學(xué)生李華，進(jìn)入高中后， 你覺得學(xué)英語課文的方式與初中有很大的不同。 你給自己的初中英語老師寫了一封信，介紹自己高中英語學(xué)習(xí)情況。內(nèi)容如下：
1.開始學(xué)習(xí)高中英語時，覺得英語課文比初中要難得多，幾乎喪失信心。
2.后來，向老師和同學(xué)請教學(xué)習(xí)英語課文的方法。在他們的幫助和鼓勵（encouragement）之下，我取得了很大的進(jìn)步，現(xiàn)在對英語閱讀越來越感興趣。
3.每天努力背英語詞匯，多讀課文，多訓(xùn)練閱讀等。
注意：
1. 信的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。
2. 應(yīng)包括以上要點，但不要逐條翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫。
3. 詞數(shù)：100左右。
Dear Miss Wang,
I’m very happy to tell you that ___________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________
Wish you all the best.
Yours,
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Miss Wang,
I’m very happy to tell you that I have made great progress in learning Senior English texts since I entered senior school.
In the beginning, I found it much more difficult to read and understand English texts than we did in Junior school and I almost lost heart. Later, I asked my teachers and classmates for ways of learning texts. It is their help and encouragement that help me improve my reading comprehending. Now I have gradually realized the importance of reading English texts. Moreover, I’m getting more and more interested in English learning, so I work hard every day to recite new words and texts and practise reading as often as possible.
I am determined to learn English well and I am sure I will make greater progress in Senior School.
Wish you all the best.
Yours,
Li Hua

試題分析：考查提綱類書面表達(dá)：這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點表達(dá)出來. 動筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點，理解要點要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題。本作文中給出的要點比較具體,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá).寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化。平時除了加強詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。
【亮點說明】范文出現(xiàn)很多常見的詞組：ways of doing“做…的方法”，. realize the importance of “意識到…的重要性”，getting more and more interested in “越來越感興趣”，practise doing練習(xí)做…， as often as possible盡可能經(jīng)常，. am determined to 決心做…，make greater progress取得更大的成功，還有使用了一些句型： I found it much more difficult to read and understand English texts than we did in Junior school and I almost lost heart. It is their help and encouragement that help me improve my reading comprehending.強調(diào)句 還有范文還使用了In the beginning, Moreover,這樣的關(guān)聯(lián)詞使文章更加連貫。