Question

【題目】假定你是李華，受疫情（pandemic）影響，學(xué)校美術(shù)俱樂部的活動(dòng)不能在原教室進(jìn)行，改為上一節(jié)網(wǎng)課。請寫信通知你的英國同學(xué)Peter。內(nèi)容包括：

1.上課時(shí)間：7月21日上午9:00-10:00；

2.登錄軟件：DingTalk App；

3.內(nèi)容：卡通畫；

4.課前準(zhǔn)備。

注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右：

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear Peter,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Peter,

How are you these days? I am writing to tell you something about our art class.

Because of the pandemic, we can’t organize any activities in our former classroom as usual. Instead, we will have an online class by DingTalk App. The class will begin at 9:00 am on July 21st . It will last about one hour, during which we will learn to draw our favorite cartoon figures.

To make good preparations for the online class, you are required to download DingTalk App on your cellphone in advance and log on at least five minutes before the class.

Hope everything goes well!

Yours,

LiHua

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求寫一封信。

第一步：

審題：信件 通知你的英國同學(xué)Peter上網(wǎng)課

人稱：第二、三人稱

時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)、一般將來時(shí)

結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法，分三部分，第一部分說明寫信目的，第二部分說明網(wǎng)課具體安排，

第三部分祝愿一切安好。

要點(diǎn)：

1. 說明寫信目的：告知美術(shù)俱樂部上課事項(xiàng)

2．說明網(wǎng)課具體安排

①上課時(shí)間：7月21日上午9:00-10:00

②登錄軟件：DingTalk App

③內(nèi)容：繪畫卡通畫

④課前準(zhǔn)備：提前下載DingTalk App，上課前5分鐘必須登陸

3．祝愿一切安好

第二步：列提綱（重點(diǎn)詞匯、短語）

tell sb. about; organize activities; as usual; have an online class; last ; cartoon figures; make preparations for ;be required to do…; in advance ; log on

第三步：連詞成句

(1)I am writing to tell you something about our art class.

(2) Because of the pandemic, we can’t organize any activities in our former classroom.

(3) We will have an online class by DingTalk App.

(4)The class will begin at 9:00 am on July 21st .

(5) It will last about one hour.

(6) During this period, we will learn to draw our favorite cartoon figures.

(7) You have to make good preparations for the online class.

(8) You are required to download DingTalk App on your cellphone in advance,

(9) You log on at least five minutes before the class.

根據(jù)提示和關(guān)鍵詞進(jìn)行遣詞造句,適當(dāng)?shù)剡\(yùn)用句型，注意時(shí)態(tài)和主謂一致問題。

第四步：連句成篇(銜接詞、亮點(diǎn)詞匯)

用多種句式表達(dá)“由于/因?yàn)椤�…�?/span>

(2)Because of the pandemic, we can’t organize any activities in our former classroom.

→Due to the pandemic, we can’t organize any activities in our former classroom.

→As a result of the pandemic, we can’t organize any activities in our former classroom.

→ The pandemic has broken out. As a result, we can’t organize any activities in our former classroom.

將第二個(gè)句子改寫成定語從句，連接下面兩個(gè)句子

(5) It will last about one hour.

(6) During this period, we will learn to draw our favorite cartoon figures.

→It will last about one hour, during which we will learn to draw our favorite cartoon figures.

將第一個(gè)句子作目的狀語，連接下面兩個(gè)句子

(7) You have to make good preparations for the online class.

(8) You are required to download DingTalk App on your cellphone in advance,

→To make good preparations for the online class, you are required to download DingTalk App on your cellphone in advance.

→In order to make good preparations for the online class, you are required to download DingTalk App on your cellphone in advance.

適當(dāng)?shù)剡\(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯、復(fù)雜句式提升文章的檔次，增加文章的可讀性。