Question

3．請根據(jù)下面內(nèi)容提示，寫一篇日記
1.5月15日，星期天，你和幾位同學(xué)早七點在校門口集合，之后步行了半小時去參觀動物園．
2．天氣很好，游客很多．你們喜歡猴子．碰到幾位外國朋友，聊了一會兒，很開心．3．但也看到了一些讓你沮喪的不文明現(xiàn)象，如隨地吐痰、亂扔垃圾、高聲喧嘩等．
4．感想
要求：
（1）文章必須包括所給的要點；
（2）可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)；
（3）字數(shù)100左右．
May 15，Sunday                                   FineToday I visited the zoo with several classmates．
                                                                         

Answer 1

分析 本文為日記．
寫作要點為：1．時間；2．事情經(jīng)過，遇到的問題；3．感想．

解答 April 15，Sunday                                   Fine
Today I visited the zoo with several classmates．Early in the morning，we got together at 7 am．outside our school gate．Then we went to the zoo on foot．It was half an hour's walk．When we got there，the zoo was already full of people．There are many animals in the zoo，which were very interesting，but we were especially interested in monkeys．They made all kinds of faces and we also talked with some foreign guests in English．Laughing and chatting，we really had a good time．However，some people behaved very badly there．For example，they dropped litter everywhere，as well as spit freely in public，which made me depressed．I think it is everyone's responsibility to behave themselves，since it's well known that China is an ancient civilized country with a long history．I do hope changes will happen in the future．
    I really had an unforgettable time today．

點評 考生需了解寫作要點及寫作意圖，合理安排寫作結(jié)構(gòu)，平時注意積累詞匯及語法知識．