Question

【題目】書面表達

上周日，你們學校組織了一次志愿者活動。假設你是李華，請你根據(jù)以下提示給校報寫一封信，報道相關情況，要點包括：

1. 活動地點：文化廣場；

2. 活動形式：發(fā)傳單、做演講；

3. 活動內容：宣傳地震常識和防震知識；

4. 參加活動的感受。

注意：

1. 詞數(shù)100左右；

2. 可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3. 開頭語和結束語已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。

參考詞匯：leaflet傳單

Dear Editor，

We took part in a voluntary activity organized by our school last Sunday.

Best wishes!

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Editor，

We took part in a voluntary activity organized by our school last Sunday. We gathered at the Culture Square, passing leaflets to passersby from which they can learn what the earthquake is and how to protect themselves against the earthquake. The leaflets drew the attention of the public to the damage that an earthquake can cause and told them to take action in a right and efficient way. Some made a public speech, telling people about the best place where they can hide when an earthquake occurs.

We have learned much from the voluntary activity, which offers us an opportunity to contribute to society. We told the public about the situation because we thought everyone should be concerned about each other and take responsibility for promoting a public cause.

Best wishes!

Yours，

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：考查開放性作文寫作,開放性作文給出了一個話題，并有部分的文字提示。給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點的能力。在完成開放性作文時，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內，選擇句式時要賦予變化，因為這樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個要點組織成一個完整的整體

【亮點說明】范文中運用一些常見的短語 draw the attention of吸引…的注意力及Some made a public speech, telling people about the best place where they can hide when an earthquake occurs中where引導的定于從句和We have learned much from the voluntary activity, which offers us an opportunity to contribute to society中which引導的非限制性定于從句等。