Question

6．假設(shè)你和幾位同學(xué)成立了一個(gè)英語(yǔ)俱樂(lè)部，開展了為期兩個(gè)月的活動(dòng)．現(xiàn)在，你將代表俱樂(lè)部在課堂上進(jìn)行經(jīng)驗(yàn)交流，請(qǐng)寫一篇英語(yǔ)發(fā)言稿，主要內(nèi)容如下：
1．簡(jiǎn)要描述俱樂(lè)部開展的一項(xiàng)與英語(yǔ)有關(guān)的主要活動(dòng)：
2．談?wù)勀銈冮_展該活動(dòng)的收獲．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)不少于120個(gè)；
2．不能使用真實(shí)姓名和．

Answer 1

分析 本文是應(yīng)用文，根據(jù)文章所給提示信息寫一篇英語(yǔ)發(fā)言稿．寫作要點(diǎn)：1．簡(jiǎn)要描述俱樂(lè)部開展的一項(xiàng)與英語(yǔ)有關(guān)的主要活動(dòng)，2．談?wù)勀銈冮_展該活動(dòng)的收獲，屬提綱作文．時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)該以一般過(guò)去時(shí)為主．人稱以第一和第三人稱為主．重要短語(yǔ)：set up（建立，搭建），conduct a variety of activities（組織很多活動(dòng)），take an active part in （積極參加），act as （充當(dāng)，作為），win the first place（贏得第一名），not only…，but also…（不但…，而且…），benefit sb （對(duì)…有益）．

解答 Today I'll talk about our English club．Our English club was set up two months ago．Now we have members of 25．We meet once a week on Saturday afternoon．So far we have conducted a variety of activities on English learning，such as watching English films，holding a Christmas party and getting together with foreign students．【高分句型】Last week，we held an English story-telling competition．We required that the entries be original and interesting and be presented in English within five minutes．Every member took an active part in the activity．Two foreign teachers were invited to act as judges．At last Li Bing won the first place．（描述俱樂(lè)部一項(xiàng)與英語(yǔ)有關(guān)的主要活動(dòng)）Many members said the activity benefited them in many ways．Not only did it improve their spoken English，but also it brought them much fun．【高分句型】They hope many such activities can be held．（開展活動(dòng)的收獲）
   That's all．Thank you．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 提綱作文在寫作時(shí)要注意內(nèi)容是否包含了所有要點(diǎn)．寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時(shí)需注意積累短語(yǔ)和重要句型．