Question

【題目】假定你是李華，暑假期間去某個(gè)島上游玩，看見有很多可愛的動(dòng)物。聽島上的一位老人說，現(xiàn)在動(dòng)物的數(shù)量日漸減少，如果不采取措施，有些動(dòng)物會(huì)有絕跡的危險(xiǎn)�；貋砗竽憬o野生動(dòng)物保護(hù)協(xié)會(huì)寫信，就保護(hù)動(dòng)物提出以下建議：

1. 制定保護(hù)動(dòng)物的法律

2. 建立動(dòng)物保護(hù)區(qū)

3. 提高公眾保護(hù)動(dòng)物的意識(shí)

提示：提高---意識(shí)：raise one’s awareness 保護(hù)區(qū)：reserve

注意：1. 詞數(shù)：100詞左右；開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，該部分不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

2. 涵蓋所有要點(diǎn)，不要逐詞翻譯，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to express my opinion on how to protect animals on the island I visited last weekend.

Please help the poor animals. I am sure that they will survive with your help.

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Sir/Madam,

I’m writing to express my opinion on how to protect the monkeys on the island I visited last weekend. The animals there are lovely, but it’s said that the number of them is decreasing year by year. If measures aren’t taken, they will be in danger of extinction.

As far as I’m concerned, laws concerning animal protection should be made to punish those illegal hunters. Besides, it is advisable to set up natural reserves or refuges. There is no doubt that animals living in safe environments are more likely to survive and reproduce. What’s more, something should be done to raise people’s awareness of protecting animals.

To sum up, protecting animals is of great urgency and it is vital for us to take steps to protect them.

Please help the poor animals. I am sure that they will survive with your help.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：本文是一篇書信類作文，需要寫出1.制定保護(hù)動(dòng)物的法律2.建立動(dòng)物保護(hù)區(qū)3.提高公眾保護(hù)動(dòng)物的意識(shí) 。寫作時(shí)還需要注意：以書信格式提供情景的作文。首先要了解書信的格式，英文書信格式與中文有所不同，(1)、一般在信紙的右上角寫上寫信人的地址和日期，地址應(yīng)按從小到大的順序排列；(2)、左邊頂格寫上收信人的姓名；(3)、正文部分；(4)、祝愿的話；(5)、寫信人簽名。信的內(nèi)容一定要按所給的要求寫，不要漏寫。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，用固定搭配As far as I’m concerned引出了自己的觀點(diǎn)。用 of great urgency代替形容詞的使用， If measures aren’t taken, they will be in danger of extinction. 是一個(gè)條件狀語(yǔ)從句，用了To sum up結(jié)尾做了一個(gè)總結(jié)，用了較多復(fù)合句讓文章更加出彩。