Question

【題目】假如你是李華，你的朋友 Robert來信說要來中國學漢語，想了解你校情況。你回信告知：你校建于1950年，校園環(huán)境優(yōu)美，有教學樓、圖書館、音樂舞蹈室、游泳池和運動場，而且你校的老師都優(yōu)秀，對學生很有耐心。

內(nèi)容要點：

(1)聽說 Robert要來你校學習，你很高興。

(2)簡單介紹你校情況。

(3)期待早日在中國見到 Robert。

注意：1、詞數(shù)80左右。

2、可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

3、開頭和結尾已給出，不算字數(shù)。

Dear Robert,

I'm glad you're coming to our school to learn Chinese.

___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Robert,

I'm glad you're coming to our school to learn Chinese. Our school was built in 1950, with beautiful campus environment. On the left is the teaching building, on the right is the library, where we study in our spare time. Besides, there are music rooms and dance rooms, where we can sing and dance. Swimming pool and playground are the places where we exercise. The teachers in our school are excellent and patient with the students.

Looking forward to seeing you in China as soon as possible.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達屬于應用文，要求考生回信Robert告知學�；�本情況。

第一步: 審題

體裁: 應用文

時態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時態(tài)應為一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時。

結構: 總分法

總分法指把主題句作為總說，把支持句作為分說，并以這種方式安排所寫內(nèi)容。

要求：

1.聽說 Robert要來你校學習,你很高興。

2.簡單介紹你校情況。

3.期待早日在中國見到 Robert。

第二步: 列提綱 (重點詞組)

look forward to；in our spare time；be patient with;as soon as possible.

第三步: 連詞成句

I'm glad you're coming to our school to learn Chinese.

Our school was built in 1950, with beautiful campus environment.

On the left is the teaching building, on the right is the library, where we study in our spare time.

Besides, there are music rooms and dance rooms, where we can sing and dance.

Swimming pool and playground are the places where we exercise.

he teachers in our school are excellent and patient with the students.

根據(jù)提示及關鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第四步: 連句成篇 (銜接詞)

1.表文章結構順序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second，And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列補充關系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, including,

3.表轉折對比關系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(從句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand,On the other hand,while,as for

4.表因果關系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

連句成文，注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，

第五步: 潤色修改