Question

16．下面的餅狀圖顯示了某校對學生學業(yè)成績評價的新體制，圖表所示①-⑤項全面構(gòu)成了一個學生的學業(yè)成績．假如你是該校學生，請根據(jù)下列圖示，以"The New Grading System in Our School"為題用英語寫一篇短文，準備給《二十一世紀英文報》投稿．內(nèi)容包括：
1．簡要描述圖中信息；
2．談談你對這一新舉措的看法并說明原因．
注意：詞數(shù)：100-120，文章的題目和開頭已給出（不計詞數(shù)）；
圖表說明：①→test results
②→notes
③→homework
④→class performances
⑤→teamwork
The New Grading System in Our SchoolIn order to help students develop their abilities in all fields，our school now has asked the teachers to make some changes in the grading system．This chart shows how it works．
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Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：
Instead，how a student performs in class，and how he takes notes and does his homework （1）are also taken into account（2），each part of which（3）makes up 20%．相反地，學生的課堂表現(xiàn)、如何記筆記以及如何做家庭作業(yè)也被考慮進去，每一部分各占20%．
（1）該部分用了兩個how引導的并列的主語從句．
（2）take…into account把…考慮進去
（3）each part of which引導了非限制性定語從句，which指代的是上文的主語從句中的三件事．
句型二：
Only by  putting the system into practice（1），can we（2）students fully develop our abilities as well as potential on our way to adulthood and truly make preparations for our future life．只有把這中評價體系付諸實施我們學生才能在成長的道路上充分發(fā)展能力和潛能并為將來的生活做好準備．
（1）put…into practice把…付諸實施；
（2）句中是"Only+狀語"放在句首，所以句中用了部分倒裝的語序．

解答 The New Grading System in Our School
In order to help students develop their abilities in all fields，our school now has asked the teachers to make some changes in the grading system．This chart shows how it works．
Students'test results，which used to be the only way to evaluate a student in school，make up only 30% of his final score．Instead，how a student performs in class，and how he takes notes and does his homework are also taken into account，each part of which makes up 20%[高分句型一]．Besides，teamwork in class is also important．If you want a higher score，you should be good at working together with your classmates（圖表中的信息）．
I'm all for the new grading system，which evaluates us students in all fields（看法）．Only by  putting the system into practice，can we students fully develop our abilities as well as potential on our way to adulthood and truly make preparations for our future life[高分句型二]（原因）．

點評 看圖作文首先正確理解提示和要求，利用文字提示去正確地理解圖意，得到要點．其次，確定體裁格式、人稱和時態(tài)．第三，列出要點，做到要點無遺漏．第四，依據(jù)內(nèi)容要點，選擇確立可供自己使用的熟悉詞匯、短語和句型，所以平時要關(guān)注高分詞匯和句型的積累．