Question

【題目】假如你是晨光中學的李津。最近，你得知你的外國朋友Tom每天都用快餐作為午餐，你覺得這不是個好習慣，請你給他寫一封信，建議他盡量少吃快餐。

文中應包括：

1. 常吃快餐的危害

2. 提出建議

參考詞匯：營養(yǎng)nutrition

注意：

1. 詞數(shù)不少于100；

2. 可以適當增加細節(jié)，使內容充實、行文連貫；

3. 開頭和結尾已給出，但不計入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Tom，

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Best Wishes

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Tom，

I’m worried to know that you often eat fast food for lunch these days. I don't think it's a wise choice Though fast food is convenient and delicious in taste，even becomes more and more popular in China，I still believe it can't provide us with adequate nutrition. To teenagers，it is usually not a balanced diet and low in cleanliness To keep healthy and get enough energy from lunch，you'd better take some home-cooking for lunch or buy some fresh food from the school canteen I don’t mean fast food should be refused in your life. But just choose it when you are really in a hurry ，or it will surely take some side effects to you，

I hope you can take my advice seriously and enjoy all kinds of delicious and healthy Chinese food.

【解析】

本篇書面表達屬于應用文，要求寫一封信。

第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，本篇為一封書信：假如你是晨光中學的李津。最近，你得知你的外國朋友Tom每天都用快餐作為午餐，你覺得這不是個好習慣，請你給他寫一封信，建議他盡量少吃快餐。文中應包括：1. 常吃快餐的危害；2. 提出建議。

第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求，確定關鍵詞（組），如：Confucius Institute （孔子學院），the Chinese poetry competition（中文詩詞比賽），my sincere congratulations（衷心的祝賀），further study（深造）等。

第3步：根據(jù)提示及關鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。