Question

書面表達(dá)(滿分25分)

請根據(jù)下面提示，用英文簡要描寫你的一位好朋友周亮。

1． 年齡16歲，身材不高，雖然不太聰明 可是相當(dāng)勤奮。經(jīng)常受到老師的表揚。

2． 興趣廣泛，愛好足球、音樂等；并經(jīng)常記日記。

3． 待人謙虛( modest )，樂于助人，與同學(xué)們相處很好。并耐心幫你學(xué)英語；

4． 大家都很喜歡他，你也喜歡他。

注意：1. 詞數(shù): 100 詞左右;

2. 題目: My Best Friend_

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Answer 1

My Best Friend

Zhou Liang is my best friend. He’s sixteen. He is not very tall.Although he is not very clever, he is very diligent and works very hard .He is always praised by our teachers.He also gets along very well with others.

He has many different interests. He is fond of music. He loves sports very much. He is a member of our school football team. Zhou Liang also likes to keep a diary evey day. He works hard at his lessons so he does well in all the subjects. He is modest and ready to help others. He has helped me with my English. With his help, I have made much progress and caught up with my classmates.

Everyone in my class likes Zhou Liang, so do I

 

【解析】

試題分析：本文是一篇關(guān)于人物的小短文。文章內(nèi)容比較簡單，只需要簡單翻譯。審題時注意時態(tài)和人稱，本文使用一般現(xiàn)在時和第三人稱。寫作時注意使用豐富的句式，不要總是使用簡單句，那樣會顯得過于單調(diào)，文章缺乏文采。同時要使用合適的連接詞，讓文章成為一個整體。注意文章要分段，不要寫成一段論。

【亮點說明】范文中運用一些常見的短語gets along very well with與。。相處融洽；keep a diary記日記；does well in擅長做某事；help sb with sth在某方面幫助某人；make progress取得進(jìn)步；He works hard at his lessons so he does well in all the subjects.這個句子so連接兩個句子；Everyone in my class likes Zhou Liang, so do I這個句子運用到so+情態(tài)動詞/助動詞/系動詞 +主語；

考點： 提綱類作文