Question

請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示，結(jié)合生活中的一個(gè)事例，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文。
Never be afraid of making mistakes. Actually, making progress is making mistakes. Mistakes reveal（揭示、顯示） where success lies.
注意：（1）無(wú)須寫標(biāo)題，不得照抄英語(yǔ)提示語(yǔ)；
（2）除詩(shī)歌外，文體不限；
（3）文中不得透露個(gè)人姓名和學(xué)校名稱；
（4）詞數(shù)120左右。

Answer 1

Mistakes are unavoidable in life. But attitudes towards them may make a difference.
I still remember how my spoken English improved. At the beginning, I always kept silent in the oral class to avoid making mistakes. Before long my teacher knew about my situation. He encouraged me to speak out what I wanted regardless of mistakes. Whenever I made mistakes and felt discouraged, my teacher and classmates would help me figure out how I could avoid them in the future. Practice makes perfect. With time going by, I built up my confidence, and now I can talk fluently in English. Just as the saying goes, every bean has its black. We just need to learn a lesson from the mistakes.
So don’t be afraid of making mistakes. Learn from them, and success is just waiting for us.

試題分析：考查半開放性作文。半開放性作文給出了一個(gè)話題，并有部分的文字提示。給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。本文討論的話題是對(duì)錯(cuò)誤的不同看法，錯(cuò)誤是進(jìn)步的過(guò)程中不可缺少的，結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際情況進(jìn)行說(shuō)明，要求考生在保證內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)全部概括的基礎(chǔ)上可以充分發(fā)揮自己的想象，進(jìn)而用自己的語(yǔ)言來(lái)表達(dá)某種觀點(diǎn)或看法，增添了寫作的靈活性，同時(shí)能較好地考查考生的想象能力和英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)言表達(dá)能力。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：對(duì)于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。在完成開放性作文時(shí)，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語(yǔ)或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體，在發(fā)表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)的時(shí)候，可以使用諺語(yǔ)來(lái)提升整個(gè)文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。