Question

【題目】假定你是李華。為了培養(yǎng)學生意志，學校對高二學生進行一次40公里步行活動�，F(xiàn)在正招募志愿者。請你給學校寫信，申請成為一名志愿者。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sir,

I’m glad to learn that the 40 km walking program is coming and some volunteers are needed for it. I have a strong desire for becoming a volunteer.

As a sports lover, I am good at various sports, such as playing basketball and ping pong, which build my body up well. So I have enough strength to offer good service to others while in the course of walking. Moreover, it will be a good opportunity for me to communicate with other students, thus making new friends with them. I will appreciate it if I am accepted as a member of volunteering.

I am looking forward to your early reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua.

【解析】本文屬于提綱類作文，要求假定你是李華。為了培養(yǎng)學生意志，學校對高二學生進行一次40公里步行活動。現(xiàn)在正招募志愿者。請你給學校寫信，申請成為一名志愿者。

考慮用一般現(xiàn)在時來寫。這篇文章對于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點的能力。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點都需要包括，缺一不可。寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，一定要契合給出的開頭，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。

【亮點說明】本篇書面表達要點全面，結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，是一篇較好的范文。這篇短文使用了大量的短語，為文章增色不少，如: be good at擅長，communicate with溝通。還使用了賓語從句I’m glad to learn that the 40 km walking program is coming and some volunteers are needed for it.和定語從句As a sports lover, I am good at various sports, such as playing basketball and ping pong, which build my body up well. So I have enough strength to offer good service to others while in the course of walking.等多種句式結(jié)構(gòu)，增加了文章的可讀性。