Question

【題目】假定你是李華，你的美國(guó)筆友Tom下個(gè)月要來(lái)中國(guó)參觀你所在的城市。現(xiàn)來(lái)信詢(xún)問(wèn)你所在城市的天氣、食物、交通等信息。請(qǐng)你回信告知情況。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Tom,

How are you doing? I’m more than happy to hear that you will come to China next month. Now let me tell you something different you may meet here.

To start with, the weather here is totally different from that in your place. It hardly rains but whenever it does, it rains heavily. So you’d better bring a raincoat with you. Another big challenge is food. To be honest, the Chinese food differs from yours, so you have to try to get accustomed to it and learn how to use chopsticks. As for traffic, you can take a bus or subway to nearly anywhere you want to. More importantly, it’s cheap and convenient.

I’m looking forward to meeting you soon.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】這是一篇提綱類(lèi)作文，文章要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)給出，在寫(xiě)這篇文章時(shí)要注意以下幾點(diǎn)：

1.整篇文章時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。

2.要點(diǎn)要齊全，但是不要進(jìn)行簡(jiǎn)單的羅列，可以采用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞，或者是表遞進(jìn)關(guān)系的副詞如To start with、So、More importantly，使上下文銜接自然，行文自然流暢。

3.此作文要分三個(gè)部分寫(xiě)，最開(kāi)始點(diǎn)出兩地的不同，中間的這一段最好用簡(jiǎn)單句與復(fù)合句結(jié)合的方法來(lái)寫(xiě)具體的不同點(diǎn)，如天氣，食物和交通，最后來(lái)做一個(gè)總結(jié)，表達(dá)一下自己的歡迎之情。

4.多采用一些高級(jí)句型，同時(shí)使用一些詞組如looking forward to，get accustomed to等。

5.注意文章要以一定的邏輯順序進(jìn)行敘述，一定要把各方觀點(diǎn)敘述清楚，細(xì)節(jié)把控要到位。否則會(huì)顯得說(shuō)服力不夠，內(nèi)容不夠豐滿。

【范文亮點(diǎn)】

提綱性文章難點(diǎn)：擴(kuò)充成句，因?yàn)樘峋V性文章主題內(nèi)容已經(jīng)基本列出，在將短句擴(kuò)充時(shí)，要精煉。其中要注意盡量用高級(jí)詞匯和復(fù)雜句是來(lái)表達(dá)，如強(qiáng)調(diào)句，定語(yǔ)從句等，就如I’m more than happy to hear that you will come to China next month。再者就是要多使用一些高級(jí)詞匯與詞組，如文中looking forward to以及get accustomed to等。最后就是段落清新，層次分明。