Question

1．假定你是高一新生李華，在學習英語過程中遇到了困難．請給English Weekly 的編輯寫一封短信．要點如下：
1．自我介紹；2．遇到的困難；3．希望得到建議和幫助
注意：1．詞數(shù)：80-100字（信的開頭和結(jié)尾已寫好，但不計入總詞數(shù)）；
2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Dear Editor，
I am Li Hua，a student of Senior One．      ．
Best wishes，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文，讓我們給English Weekly 的編輯寫一封信，這需要我們發(fā)揮英語思維，將提供的信息用英語完整流暢的表達出來．寫作需要用第一人稱，時態(tài)主要是一般現(xiàn)在時，內(nèi)容要點包括：今年六月即將參加高考，但在學習英語過程中遇到了困難，心里很焦慮．自我介紹；
遇到的困難；希望得到建議和幫助．我們此篇作文分為兩部分，第一部分為自我介紹．第二部分為遇到的困難；希望得到建議和幫助．
重點短語與句型：
take part in 參加
the College Entrance Examination 高考
have  trouble in  doing sth．在做某事方面有困難
 language points語言點
高分句型一：It seems that I have made little progress in English．此句為It seems that…等于sb seems to do sth．
高分句型二：There are endless English test papers waiting for me to do．此句為現(xiàn)在分詞作后置定語
高分句型三：I become worried and afraid that I will fall behind in English，which will eventually prevent me from going to college．此句為非限制性定語從句．

解答 Dear Editor，
    I am Li Hua，a student of senior grade three．I'm going to take part in the College Entrance Examination in June．I have some trouble in learning English．It seems that I have made little progress in English．高分句型一 I hope you can give me some useful advice．（自我介紹）
    The problems I am facing now are as follows．There are endless English test papers waiting for me to do 高分句型二．I have never got satisfying marks．It is a hard job for me to remember and use grammatical rules．As a result，I often get low marks in multiple choice questions．Besides，I find it difficult to write good English compositions．My English teacher is always explaining the language points in class and I can hardly take them down．I become worried and afraid that I will fall behind in English，which will eventually prevent me from going to college高分句型三．Could you help me，please？（遇到的困難；希望得到建議和幫助）
                                                                                                                                   Best wishes，
                                                                                                                                       Li Hua．

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．