Question

1．Directions：Write an English composition in 120-150words according to the instructions．
你是李華，為解決你所在的學(xué)校公益社團（public welfare society）的資金短缺問題，請給全校學(xué)生寫一封募捐信，募集5000元善款．信中必須包括：
1．向全校的捐款號召．
2．你發(fā)起這一活動的理由．
3．你準(zhǔn)備怎樣使用善款的計劃．
（文中不得出現(xiàn)考生姓名，學(xué)校等任何真實信息）

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提綱作文．根據(jù)所提供的材料信息，寫一封募捐信，募集5000元善款．寫作要點包括：1．向全校的捐款號召； 2．你發(fā)起這一活動的理由；3．你準(zhǔn)備怎樣使用善款的計劃．
寫作時時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時為主，人稱以第一和第三人稱為主．
重要短語：in total （總計，總共），be faced with （面臨），be short of （缺乏，短缺），lead to （導(dǎo)致…），be in need （需要），appeal to sb to do sth （呼吁某人做某事），raise money （籌集資金），have no access to（沒有接近/進入…的機會），due to （由于），in addition （除…之外），cope with （處理…），spare no efforts （不遺余力），in advance（提前），look forward to（期望…）．

【高分句型】
1．①Faced with great difficulties currently，we are short of financial funds ②which directly lead to the inactiveness of the society．
①這里是過去分詞faced作狀語，主句為we are short of financial funds ②which directly lead to the inactiveness of the society，主句的主語為we與所給的動詞face存在邏輯上的被動關(guān)系，某人面臨"be faced with sth"．
②這里是由which引導(dǎo)的定語從句，which在定語從句中作主語，先行詞是 financial funds．

2．The money ①we raise here will mostly go to the remote mountainous areas ②to fund 3 children ③who have no access to school due to poverty．
①這里是定語從句，先行詞是the money，定語從句中主語為we，謂語動詞為raise，缺少賓語，從句中省略了關(guān)系代詞that/which．
②這里是動詞不定式作目的狀語．
③這里是who引導(dǎo)的定語從句，who在定語從句作主語，先行詞是children．

解答 Dear students，
I'm writing to you for your donation to our public welfare society--5，000 yuan intotal．
   Faced with great difficulties currently，we are short of financial funds whichdirectly lead to the inactiveness of the society．【高分句型】Without the money，we can do nothing but imagine in our mind the help to thosewho are in need．Without the money，we can't be the one to give a helpful handto those who are in need．（發(fā)起這一活動的理由）So I'm here to appeal to all of you to get us out of the financialembarrassment．（向全校的捐款號召）
   The money we raise here will mostly go to the remote mountainous areas to fund3 children who have no access to school due to poverty．【高分句型】We'llpay all the fees for the 3 children and get them all the study necessities suchas the text books and stationery．In addition，we will spare some cash to the 3children's family to help them cope with some financial barriers．（準(zhǔn)備怎樣使用善款）
   We have the faith that we should spare no efforts to help the disadvantaged．【高分句型】Only with your help can we perform our plan．Thanks in advance and we are lookingforward to your help．（結(jié)尾）
Sincerelyyours，
Li Hua

點評 寫好提綱式作文的關(guān)鍵是認真審題和分析所給的提綱，并以此為基礎(chǔ)充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運用英語知識，采用不同的表達方式將各要點完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)．語言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡潔．根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料．同時應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性．最后必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點誤用等．