Question

14．假定你是李華，你的美國筆友Tom來信說要來你所在的城市旅行．請用英語給他寫一封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括：
1．發(fā)出邀請；
2．介紹你所在的城市；
3．提議陪同期間的活動．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Tom，
I'm very glad to learn that you are coming to my city for travel．Certainly as your friend．I will accompany you all the time while you are here and all my family are expecting to hold a grand party on your arrival．（高分句型一）
My city lies in the southeast of China，famous for mountains and oceans．Here you can have the best tea in the world and get to know the warmest people．As a cultural center with a long history，our city has many buildings．presenting traditional Chinese style as well as modem western style．（高分句型二）So，I suggest we visit some most famous old buildings and taste some unique local foods．Above all，a street full of local goods is a place we must go to and where you can buy some gifts for your family．（高分句型三）
Looking forward to meeting you earlier．
Sincerely yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息假定你是李華，你的美國筆友Tom來信說要來你所在的城市旅行．請用英語給他寫一封電子郵件．寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)：發(fā)出邀請；介紹你所在的城市；提議陪同期間的活動．2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：lie in位于；as well as也，和；Above all首先，最重要的是；Look forward to盼望；hold a  party舉行晚會
I will accompany you all the time while you are here and all my family are expecting to hold a grand party on your arrival．（高分句型一）
As a cultural center with a long history，our city has many buildings．presenting traditional Chinese style as well as modem western style．（高分句型二）
Above all，a street full of local goods is a place we must go to and where you can buy some gifts for your family．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Tom，
       I'm very glad to learn that you are coming to my city for travel．Certainly as your friend．I will accompany you all the time while you are here and all my family are expecting to hold a grand party on your arrival．（高分句型一）
       My city lies in the southeast of China，famous for mountains and oceans．Here you can have the best tea in the world and get to know the warmest people．As a cultural center with a long history，our city has many buildings．presenting traditional Chinese style as well as modem western style．（高分句型二）So，I suggest we visit some most famous old buildings and taste some unique local foods．Above all，a street full of local goods is a place we must go to and where you can buy some gifts for your family．（高分句型三）
       Looking forward to meeting you earlier．
                                                                                                                                                                                         Sincerely yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                  Li Hua

點(diǎn)評 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．