Question

某英文報社準備刊發(fā)一篇題為”Living in a City”有關(guān)城市生活利和弊的文章。根據(jù)下面提示寫一篇英語短文。
優(yōu)點：找工作容易；交通便利；有公園、飯店等休閑場所。   
缺點：生活消費高；人口多，擁擠；空氣污染，居住環(huán)境差。
要求：1. 覆蓋以上全部內(nèi)容，可適當發(fā)揮。
2. 詞數(shù)100左右，標題已給出。

Answer 1

Living in a City
Living in a city has both advantages and disadvantages. It is often easier to find work. There are always many choices of public transport. Besides, there are a lot of interesting things to do and places to see. You can eat in good restaurants, visit museums, go to cinemas and go to parks whenever you want to relax.
However, living in a city is often very expensive. You must find a well-paid job, otherwise, you will not be able to afford the things you will do. What's more, the city is always crowded, noisy and dirty. It is very difficult to find a good place where people can enjoy peace and fresh air as in the countryside.
Anyway, you can make the choice that suits you best.

試題分析：題目要求以“Living in a City”為題，寫一篇關(guān)于城市生活的利與弊的短文。作文必須包含所有
要點，用第一人稱進行寫作，分段闡述優(yōu)點和缺點，最后作出總結(jié)。注意時態(tài)、語法知識的正確使用，不能出現(xiàn)拼寫和標點錯誤。
【亮點說明】范文重視使用Besides, However, otherwise, What's more, Anyway等來銜接上下文，從而使作文語意連貫、銜接緊湊；
范文使用了固定搭配both advantages and disadvantages和動名詞短語Living in a city等基礎(chǔ)知識；
范文使用了一些重點語法知識：固定句型It is often easier to find work.；讓步狀語從句whenever you want to relax；定語從句afford the things you will do，where people can enjoy peace and fresh air和that suits you best；省略as in the countryside等，使用重點語法知識，給作文增色很多；