Question

7．假定你是李華，正在美國某中學(xué)做交換生，你校將舉行以"建設(shè)文明校園"為主題的倡議活動．請你代表學(xué)生會給全體師生寫一封倡議書，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：1．該活動的意義；2．具體措施（遵守學(xué)校、班級規(guī)定；舉止文明；關(guān)愛、幫助他人等）；3．號召人人從我做起．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右．
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．參考詞匯：a civilized campus   文明校園  regulation 規(guī)章，規(guī)定
Dear teachers and students，
Before long our school will launch a campaign aimed at creating a civilize campus．The following are what all of us should do．
First of all，we should obey rules and regulationsmade by our school and classes．Secondly，we should mind our own manners at any time．More importantly，we should care about others and try our best to help people in need．
It is everyone's responsibilityto create a civilized campus．So let's start now any do a little every day．only in this way can our campus become a better place to study and live．
The Students'Union．

Answer 1

分析 這是一封以"建設(shè)文明校園"為主題的倡議書．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．內(nèi)容包括：一點(diǎn)明活動的主題以及目的；二簡述活動的具體措施；三號召人人從我做起．
高分句型：
1．Before long our school will launch a campaign aimed at creating a civilize campus．句子里aimed at creating a civilize campus是過去分詞做a campaign 的定語，表示"目的在于創(chuàng)建一個文明校園"．
不久我們學(xué)校會發(fā)起一項目的在于創(chuàng)建一個文明校園的活動．
2．only in this way can our campus become a better place to study and live．句子里only引導(dǎo)狀語 in this way，主句 can our campus become a better place to study and live．用了部分倒裝．
只有用這種方式，我們的校園才能是一個適宜學(xué)習(xí)和居住的更好的地方．

解答 Dear teachers and students，
     Before long our school will launch a campaign aimed at creating a civilize campus．【高分句型一】The following are what all of us should do．（點(diǎn)明活動的主題以及目的）
    First of all，we should obey rules and regulations made by our school and classes．Secondly，we should mind our own manners at any time．More importantly，we should care about others and try our best to help people in need．（簡述活動的具體措施）
     It is everyone's responsibility to create a civilized campus．So let's start now any do a little every day．only in this way can our campus become a better place to study and live．【高分句型二】（號召人人從我做起）
                                                                  The Students'Union

點(diǎn)評 考查提綱類作文．
寫完作文以后，要通讀全文，檢查內(nèi)容是否符合要求，要點(diǎn)是否齊全，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否合乎要求．最主要的是要檢查句子是否符合英語習(xí)慣，句型是否正確，語法是否正確（包括句子結(jié)構(gòu)、時態(tài)、語態(tài)、主謂一致等），檢查單詞是否誤寫、少寫，習(xí)語搭配是否得當(dāng)?shù)�，以及字母大小寫、�?biāo)點(diǎn)符號是否正確等，這就要求考生在定稿認(rèn)真檢查，仔細(xì)核對，及時發(fā)現(xiàn)并改正問題，保證要點(diǎn)齊全，句子完整通順，力爭減少失誤．