Question

對(duì)于中學(xué)生上網(wǎng)人們有不同的看法。請(qǐng)你以“Going Online”為題，根據(jù)下表所提供的信息，談?wù)勛约旱目捶ǎ?00詞左右）

Advantages	Disadvantages
能增長(zhǎng)知識(shí)，了解國(guó)內(nèi)外大事，緊跟時(shí)代；有利于學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)，能結(jié)交很多朋友	上網(wǎng)玩游戲影響學(xué)習(xí)，而且對(duì)視力有害，易受不良信息的影響
建議：適度上網(wǎng)；要把學(xué)習(xí)、健康和安全放在首位等

Going Online

Answer 1

Going online
Recently going online has become more and more popular with middle school students.
In my opinion, there are some advantages for the students to go online. First, it can broaden our knowledge and make us know the latest news at home and abroad. Second, there are many learning materials on the Internet which are useful for us to learn English. Also, we can make many online friends.
However, there are some disadvantages. Most students play computer games instead of studying their lessons, which will affect their study. What’s worse, going online too often can do harm to our eyes. Besides, without much experience, it’s easy for us to make bad friends and be influenced to do stupid things.
So I think as students, we can go online properly. We should choose things which are valuable to our study and life. We must place study, health and safety before other things.

試題分析：這是一篇話題類作文。對(duì)于中學(xué)生上網(wǎng)人們有不同的看法。請(qǐng)你以“Going Online”為題，根據(jù)下表所提供的信息，談?wù)勛约旱目捶�。需要寫的�?nèi)容已經(jīng)粗略給出，需要我們翻譯成完整通順的句子，適當(dāng)添加些內(nèi)容，使文章更充實(shí)。寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題。一定要給出自己的看法。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型為文章潤(rùn)色。注意要求的詞數(shù)100詞左右，不要太多也不要太少。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】Second, there are many learning materials on the Internet which are useful for us to learn English.這里含有一個(gè)定語(yǔ)從句；However, there are some disadvantages. Most students play computer games instead of studying their lessons, which will affect their study.這里含有一個(gè)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句。We should choose things which are valuable to our study and life. 這里含有一個(gè)定語(yǔ)從句