Question

3．請(qǐng)就平時(shí)課堂上同學(xué)發(fā)言的情況給你的英語(yǔ)老師寫一封郵件．郵件的內(nèi)容必須包括：
1．部分同學(xué)（可包括自己）不愿主動(dòng)發(fā)言的原因；
2．提出今后改進(jìn)的建議；
3．文中不要出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱．
Dear Mr Lin，
I'm glad to tell you that I have made great progress in my English study since I became a senior high school student．
But as you see，there are still some students including me who are not willing toask and answerquestions actively in class．I think some reasons cause this problems．For one thing we are afraid that the questions we come up with disturb your teaching．For another，If we can not answer questions correctly，others may laugh at us．
So I suggest that you arrange some time to answer our questions once a month，where we can put up our question freely．Besides，you should always encourage students to answer questions and speak highly of themwhether their answers are right or not．
Thank you so much for your reading．And I hope we can get a higher grade．
Wish you all the best．
Yours
LiHua．

Answer 1

分析 這是給英語(yǔ)老師寫的一封郵件．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．內(nèi)容包括：一表達(dá)感謝；二部分同學(xué)包括自己不愿主動(dòng)發(fā)言的原因；三提出今后改進(jìn)的建議；四感謝閱讀并且提出希望．
高分句型：
1．But as you see，there are still some students including me  who are not willing to ask and answer questions actively in class．句子里as 引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，表示"正如"，代指主句；who引導(dǎo)定語(yǔ)從句，代指先行詞some students．
但是正如你所知，包括我在內(nèi)，有一些學(xué)生在課堂上不愿主動(dòng)的問(wèn)答問(wèn)題．
2．So I suggest that you  arrange a special time to answer our questions once a month，when we can put up our question freely 句子里I suggest后用 that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句； when引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，表示"在這一時(shí)間"．
因此我建議老師每個(gè)月能夠安排一個(gè)特別的時(shí)間，在這個(gè)時(shí)間我們能夠自由的提出問(wèn)題．

解答 Dear Mr Lin，
     I'm glad to tell you that I have made great progress in my English study since I became a senior high school student．（表達(dá)感謝）
     But as you see，there are still some students including me  who are not willing to ask and answer questions actively in class．【高分句型一】I think some reasons cause this problems．For one thing we are afraid that  the questions we come up with disturb your teaching．For another，If  we can not answer questions correctly，others may laugh at us．（部分同學(xué)包括自己不愿主動(dòng)發(fā)言的原因）
     So I suggest that you  arrange  a special  time to answer our questions once a month，when we can put up our question freely．【高分句型二】Besides，you should always encourage students to answer questions and speak highly of them whether their answers are right or not．（提出今后改進(jìn)的建議）
     Thank you so much for your reading．And I hope we can get a higher grade．（感謝閱讀并且提出希        Wish you all the best．
                                                                                                                     Yours
                                                                                                                     LiHua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 考查提綱類作文．
提綱類書面表達(dá)主要特點(diǎn)是：要點(diǎn)明確，范圍具體，貼近生活，易于動(dòng)筆．此類試題中有較多的文字說(shuō)明，實(shí)際上規(guī)定了考生表述的思路，對(duì)考生的寫作范圍作了較為明確的限定，試題中規(guī)定的要點(diǎn)一個(gè)也不能回避．考生極易受中文提綱的制約，將書面表達(dá)變成了翻譯，造成語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和語(yǔ)匯上的單調(diào)，因此平時(shí)要多練習(xí)，活用語(yǔ)言，使文章流暢．