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13．作為一名中學(xué)生，你肯定參加過多次考試，體驗(yàn)過成功，也遭遇過失敗．請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇英語(yǔ)短
文，簡(jiǎn)要介紹一下中學(xué)生對(duì)待考試失敗的態(tài)度，內(nèi)容包括：
 1．有的學(xué)生情緒低落，喪失信心，不再繼續(xù)努力；
 2．有的學(xué)生努力找出失敗的原因，鼓勵(lì)自己增強(qiáng)自信，避免再犯同樣的錯(cuò)誤；
 3．你的觀點(diǎn)．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．

Answer 1

分析 本文是關(guān)于中學(xué)生對(duì)待考試失敗的態(tài)度問題的作文．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．內(nèi)容包括：一提出要討論的話題；二有的學(xué)生消極的態(tài)度；三有的學(xué)生的積極態(tài)度；四自己的觀點(diǎn)．
高分句型：
1．They spare no efforts in analyzing the cause of their failure and at the same time encourage themselves to become more confident so that they won't repeat their mistakes in their later examinations．句子里spare no efforts 表示"不遺余力"； analyzing the cause of their failure 表示"分析失敗的原因"；so that 引導(dǎo)目的狀語(yǔ)從句，表示"為了"．
為了避免再犯同樣的錯(cuò)誤，有的學(xué)生不遺余力的分析失敗的原因，同時(shí)鼓勵(lì)自己更加自信．
2．As long as we can find out the root cause of our failure and step up our efforts to improve our ways of learning，we can surely make great progress and turn our dreams into reality．句子里As long as引導(dǎo)條件狀語(yǔ)從句，表示"只要"；step up our efforts to 表示"加快（增加）某人的努力 來做…"；turn our dreams into reality表示"把我們的夢(mèng)想變成現(xiàn)實(shí)"．
只要我們能夠找到失敗的原因，加快努力來改進(jìn)我們的學(xué)習(xí)方法，我們肯定能夠取得巨大的進(jìn)步，把我們的夢(mèng)想變成現(xiàn)實(shí)．

解答 As middle school students，we all have taken examinations of different types and experienced success as well as failure．Different students have different attitudes towards failure in the exams．（提出要討論的話題）
       Some of us become low in spirits in the face of failure．Worse still，some students are so disappointed that they don't want to make further efforts in their studies．As a result，their studies go from bad to worse as time goes on．（有的學(xué)生消極的態(tài)度）
       Fortunately，some students take quite positive attitudes towards their setbacks．They spare no efforts in analyzing the cause of their failure and at the same time encourage themselves to become more confident so that they won't repeat their mistakes in their later examinations．【高分句型一】（有的學(xué)生的積極態(tài)度）
       As far as I'm concerned，I believe that failure is the mother of success．As long as we can find out the root cause of our failure and step up our efforts to improve our ways of learning，we can surely make great progress and turn our dreams into reality．【高分句型二】（自己的觀點(diǎn)）

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