Question

16．假設(shè)你是李華．你的加拿大筆友卡爾想了解中國流行的廣場舞（square dance）的相關(guān)情況．請你用英語給他寫封回信，要點(diǎn)包括：
1．跳廣場舞的時間、地點(diǎn)、參與人員等；
2．廣場舞流行的原因；
3．廣場舞引起的爭議．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100字左右；
2．開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫出，不計入總詞數(shù)；
3．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Dear Carl，
I'm delighted to hear from you and I will tell you what you're curious about…
Square dance becomes more popular than anytime before．However，it's a little different from the dance you are familiar with．In the morning or after dinner，people，especially elderly women，will gather in squares to dance to popular music．More and more young people are also joining in now．
There are many reasons behind its popularity．First of all，China has made great progress in its social and economical development in the past decades，and people have more time and energy to enjoy themselves．Besides，doing the square dance is a good way for people to get fit．
However，because dancers play loud music and occupy lots of public places，they annoy many people．Maybe square dancers need to make some changes．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇關(guān)于廣場舞話題的作文．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．內(nèi)容包括：一跳廣場舞的時間、地點(diǎn)、參與人員等；二廣場舞流行的原因；三廣場舞引起的爭議．
高分句型：
1．However，it's a little different from the dance you are familiar with．句子里you are familiar with是 先行詞the dance的定語從句，省略了關(guān)系詞that/which．．
可是，它和你熟悉的舞蹈不太一樣．
2．Besides，doing the square dance is a good way for people to get fit．句子里動名詞短語doing the square dance 做主語；get fit表示"保持健康"．
此外，跳廣場舞是保持健康的好方法．

解答 Dear Carl，
   I'm delighted to hear from you and I will tell you what you're curious about．Square dance becomes more popular than anytime before．However，it's a little different from the dance you are familiar with．【高分句型一】In the morning or after dinner，people，especially elderly women，will gather in squares to dance to popular music．More and more young people are also joining in now．（跳廣場舞的時間、地點(diǎn)、參與人員等）
   There are many reasons behind its popularity．First of all，China has made great progress in its social and economical development in the past decades，and people have more time and energy to enjoy themselves．Besides，doing the square dance is a good way for people to get fit．【高分句型二】（廣場舞流行的原因）
   However，because dancers play loud music and occupy lots of public places，they annoy many people．Maybe square dancers need to make some changes．（廣場舞引起的爭議）
                                                         Yours，
                                                         Li Hua

點(diǎn)評 考查提綱類作文．
不同于語文作文，英語作文一定要打草稿，一是為了改掉錯誤，添加亮點(diǎn)句子和短語；二是為了卷面整潔干凈．這就要求給作文留25分鐘左右的時間，相對于它的分?jǐn)?shù)，這些時間是值得的．