11．假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文．文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處．錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(xiàn)（\）劃掉．
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線(xiàn)，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及修改均僅限一詞；
 2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．
One day I happened to find chat room on QQ，where people were chatting with English．I tried to chat with some of them．To my surprise，I find that the spoken English of some junior students was better than me．I asked them for advices and they told me to practice more on QQ．But every day after school I would spend one hour practice my spoken English on QQ．Day after day I learned much useful words and expressions．As time going by，I found that I could even communicate with some college students free．

分析 文章講述了我無(wú)意中發(fā)現(xiàn)了一個(gè)英語(yǔ)聊天室，通過(guò)英語(yǔ)交流，我發(fā)現(xiàn)自己的英語(yǔ)口語(yǔ)得到了很大的提高．

解答 One day I happened to find∧chat room on QQ，where people were chatting with English．I tried to chat with some of them．To my surprise，I find that the spoken English of some junior students was better than me．I asked them for advices and they told me to practice more on QQ．But every day after school I would spend one hour practice my spoken English on QQ．Day after day I learned much useful words and expressions．As time going by，I found that I could even communicate with some college students free．
詳解：1．加a；冠詞錯(cuò)誤．句意表達(dá)的是泛指一個(gè)聊天房間，要用不定冠詞來(lái)限定．
2．with改為in；介詞錯(cuò)誤．in English用英語(yǔ)．
3．find改為found；時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤．句意表達(dá)的是過(guò)去的事情，要用一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)．
4．me改為mine；代詞錯(cuò)誤．句意指代的是my spoken English，要用名詞性物主代詞來(lái)構(gòu)成．
5．a(chǎn)dvices改為advice；名詞錯(cuò)誤．a(chǎn)dvice建議，不可數(shù)名詞，沒(méi)有復(fù)數(shù)．
6．But改為So；連詞錯(cuò)誤．句意表達(dá)的是承接，不是轉(zhuǎn)折．
7．practice改為practicing；短語(yǔ)搭配錯(cuò)誤．spend some time（in）doing sth花時(shí)間做某事．
8．much改為many；形容詞錯(cuò)誤．句中修飾的是可數(shù)名詞words and expressions，要用many來(lái)修飾．
9．going改為went；謂語(yǔ)錯(cuò)誤．句中as連接伴隨狀語(yǔ)從句，且句意表達(dá)的是過(guò)去，要用一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)的謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞went來(lái)構(gòu)成．
10．free改為freely；副詞錯(cuò)誤．句中free修飾的是動(dòng)詞communicate，要用副詞形式．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 短文改錯(cuò)題考查的是語(yǔ)境理解能力和用法基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)．�？嫉闹R(shí)點(diǎn)有：名詞（單復(fù)數(shù)錯(cuò)誤），動(dòng)詞（時(shí)態(tài)，語(yǔ)態(tài)，搭配，轉(zhuǎn)換），代詞（指代錯(cuò)誤），形容詞和副詞（轉(zhuǎn)換，比較等級(jí)），連詞（and，but，or）等．偶爾也會(huì)考查邏輯錯(cuò)誤，如本來(lái)用her，卻用了his等等．解題是要注意：以句子為單位，以動(dòng)詞為中心．看句子要看完整，避免句子前后矛盾的錯(cuò)誤；找錯(cuò)誤要以動(dòng)詞為主，動(dòng)詞或與動(dòng)詞有關(guān)的錯(cuò)誤占了改錯(cuò)的題的重要一部分．

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