【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有 10 處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號( )，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。 刪除：把多余的詞用(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改 10 處，多者（從第 11 處起）不計分。

To whom it may concern,

I am one of your customer. I am unwilling to complain, and your service really annoys me. I order a set of Bookworm Series on your website the other day, but not until yesterday I receive it. Much to my disappointment, the books were so poorly packed up that the cover of one book was torn. To make matters bad, it was not a complete set, as I found one book missed.

I am sorry to have received such poor service. I believe I have every right to ask you to deal with a problem. I hope that you either return my money back or deliver a new set of books to me. Therefore, I’d like to be informed of the process of your dealing with my complain.

Looking forward to your reply.

Sincerely,

Wang Ling

【答案】1. customer→customers

2. and→but

3. order→ ordered

4. yesterday后加did

5. bad → worse

6. missed→missing

7. a→ the /this

8. back去掉

9. Therefore→ Besides

10. complain→ complaint

【解析】

本文為一篇書信。作者網(wǎng)購了一套書，遭遇較差服務、書籍缺少和封面破損等情況。作者寫信要求賣家解決問題。

1．考查可數(shù)名詞單復數(shù)。句意：我是你的一個顧客。此處是one of句型指“……之一”，后面接可數(shù)名詞的復數(shù)形式。故將customer改為customers。

2．考查連詞。句意：我不想抱怨，但是你們的服務真的惹惱了我。前句I am unwilling to complain 我不想抱怨，后句your service really annoys me你的服務真的惹惱了我，兩句話之間是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系。故將and改為but。

3．考查時態(tài)。句意：前幾天我在你們網(wǎng)站上訂購了一系列書蟲系列的書，但直到昨天我才收到。結(jié)合前文the other day前幾天，可知該句描述的是過去的事情，故該句應用一般過去時，動詞用過去式。故將order改為 ordered。

4．考查倒裝句。句意：前幾天我在你們網(wǎng)站上訂購了一系列書蟲系列的書，但直到昨天我才收到。分析句子可知，當not until用于句首時，句子應該部分倒裝，將助動詞調(diào)到主語前面，且事情發(fā)生在過去，用助動詞did。故yesterday后加did。

5．考查形容詞的比較級。句意：更糟糕的是，這不是一套完整的，我發(fā)現(xiàn)有一本書丟了。結(jié)合語境可知，我發(fā)現(xiàn)有一本書丟了，這是更糟糕的，bad應用比較級形式。故bad 改為 worse。

6．考查形容詞。句意：更糟糕的是，這不是一套完整的，我發(fā)現(xiàn)有一本書丟了。分析句子可知，此處指一本書丟了，missing作賓補，解釋說明book的狀態(tài)。故missed改為missing.

7．考查冠詞。句意：我相信我有權(quán)力要求你處理這個問題。分析句子可知，這個問題特指上午提到的問題，特指要用定冠詞the，或表示這個問題用this。故a改為 the /this。

8．考查動詞。句意：我希望你要么把我的錢還給我，要么給我寄一套新的書。句中return指“歸還”，后面加back重復。故去掉back。

9．考查副詞。句意：此外，我想知道你處理我投訴的過程。Therefore意為“因此”，表示原因；Besides意為“此外”，表示遞進，此處表示遞進，故Therefore改為Besides。

10．考查名詞。句意：此外，我想知道你處理我投訴的過程。分析句子可知，with作為介詞，后面應加名詞，因此要用complain的名詞形式。故complain改為complaint。

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