Question

20．假定你是李華，你在美國的筆友Jack寫信告訴你他對中國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日端午節(jié)很感興趣．請給你的筆友Jack寫一封信介紹端午節(jié)，信的具體內(nèi)容包括：
1．端午節(jié)的時間（五月初五）
2．端午節(jié)紀(jì)念的對象
3．人們?nèi)绾螒c祝端午節(jié)
4．你對端午節(jié)的看法
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右，信的開頭和格式已為你寫好．
2．可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
3．參考詞匯：端午節(jié)-Dragon Boat Festival農(nóng)歷-Lunar Year

Dear Jack，
It's good to know you are interested in the traditional Dragon Boat Festival in China．                
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心．注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)．要求介紹．同時應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性．溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點誤用等．寫作中應(yīng)該盡量使用高級詞匯及高級句型，使文章的表達(dá)更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理．
高級詞匯及句型
   a respected patriotic poet；devotion to；Hopeless and angry；the true spirit of honesty and loyalty of our ancestors
    The festival was created in honor of a respected patriotic poet in ancient China，who had great devotion to the people but was unfairly treated by the unwise king of his country．（高級句型一）
    Hopeless and angry，he threw himself into the Milo River to prove his love to his motherland．（高級句型二）
     By celebrating it，we follow the trace of the forefathers who handed down the virtues．（高級句型三）

解答 Dear Jack，
It's good to know you are interested in the traditional Dragon Boat Festival in China．Dragon Boat Festival falls on the fifth day of the fifth month of the Chinese Lunar Year．The festival was created in honor of a respected patriotic poet in ancient China，who had great devotion to the people but was unfairly treated by the unwise king of his country．（高級句型一） Hopeless and angry，he threw himself into the Milo River to prove his love to his motherland．（高級句型二）
Nowadays，people in China observe this traditional holiday by holding dragon boat races and eating zong zi which is made of rice wrapped in bamboo leaves．
In my opinion，as a traditional Chinese festival，Dragon Boat Festival keeps us reminded of the true spirit of honesty and loyalty of our ancestors．By celebrating it，we follow the trace of the forefathers who handed down the virtues．（高級句型三）
Yours，
Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實 的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．