Question

【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。作文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（^）并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)誤的詞下面畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

Dear Sir,

Having read about your newspaper’s decision to start a campaign for protecting the environment, I decide to write you this letter.

The state of our park is very shocked, with rubbish everywhere. I was used to find a trip to the park very relaxing. Upon the arrival of spring, beautiful birds would sing happy in the park. I enjoyed this very much. Therefore, now I just find it tiring, because I have to pick up rubbish where I am going to sit. The grass is covered on plastic bags and food. I am sad that the young people of today do not clean up after themselves before he leave the park. There are so much interesting animals and insects living in our parks. It would be shame if they were destroyed because of people’s activity there.

Yours

Wang Qiang

Answer 1

【答案】1.decide--- decided

2.shocked---- shocking

3. 去掉was

4.happy---happily

5. Therefore----However

6. on----- in/with

7. he----- they

8. much----many

9. ∧a shame

10. activity----activities

【解析】1.句意：我決定給你寫這封信。根據(jù)句意可知句子用一般過去時(shí)態(tài)，故把.decide--- decided。

2.句意：公園的狀態(tài)是令人震驚的，到處都是垃圾。Shocking令人震驚的，shocked感到震驚的，故把shocked---- shocking。

3. 句意：我過去覺得公園是令人放松的。故把句中was去掉。

4.副詞修飾動(dòng)詞，故把happy---happily。

5.句意：以前覺得公園是美的，非常喜歡。然而，現(xiàn)在覺得它是非常無聊的。此處表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，故把Therefore----However。

6.句意：草被塑料袋和食物覆蓋著。故把on----- in/with。

7.句意：今天的年輕人在他們離開之前不會(huì)自我清理。故把he----- they。

8. animals是可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)，用many修飾，故把much----many。

9.句意：這將是一件羞愧的事。故在shame前加a。

10.句意：如果他們因?yàn)槿藗兊幕顒?dòng)而被摧毀，那將是一件可恥的事。此處應(yīng)該用名詞的復(fù)數(shù)形式，故把activity----activities。