Question

14．在生活中有人喜歡運(yùn)動(dòng)，也有人不太喜歡運(yùn)動(dòng)，你校就"學(xué)校應(yīng)不應(yīng)該召開(kāi)運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)"進(jìn)行了調(diào)查，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下調(diào)查結(jié)果寫(xiě)一篇150詞左右的短文，并簡(jiǎn)要發(fā)表你自己的觀點(diǎn)．以下是調(diào)查結(jié)果：

80%支持	1、增強(qiáng)體質(zhì)； 2、培養(yǎng)合作精神； 3、學(xué)會(huì)如何面對(duì)勝負(fù)；
20%反對(duì)	1、并非是強(qiáng)身健體的唯一形式； 2、容易造成傷害； 3、影響學(xué)習(xí)；
你的看法	（至少兩點(diǎn)理由）…

注意：1．根據(jù)要點(diǎn)可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，但不要逐條翻譯；
2．字?jǐn)?shù)150左右．文章開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
3．作文中不得提及考生所在學(xué)校和本人姓名．
注：增強(qiáng)體質(zhì) build up one's strength
Some people like sport while others not in our life．Recently，our school conducted a survey about whether the school should hold a sports meeting or not，students'opinions are divided on the topic．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
80% of the students think that sport does them good．
高分句型二：
For another，it's a good way of relaxing ourselves，making our school life colorful．
句型一 that sport does them good．該句是一個(gè)由that充當(dāng)引導(dǎo)詞的賓語(yǔ)從句，that不作句子成分，只起到引導(dǎo)作用
句型二 making our school life colorful．該處使用了現(xiàn)在分詞做伴隨狀語(yǔ)，現(xiàn)在分詞在此處表主動(dòng)．
此外，該書(shū)面表達(dá)中還包含有以下重要短語(yǔ)和高級(jí)詞匯：
first of all    首先     in addition   此外     deal with  處理    have an effect on  對(duì)．．有影響
該書(shū)面表達(dá)中的重要句型部分的從句的使用和高級(jí)短語(yǔ)和詞匯的使用，使得文章更層次分明，表述更加確切完整．

解答 Some people like sport while others not in our life．Recently，our school conducted a survey about whether the school should hold a sports meeting or not，students'opinions are divided on the topic．（提出話(huà)題）
   80% of the students think sport does them good．（高分句型一）First of all，sport helps them build up their strength，keeping them healthy．In addition，it helps develop students'ability to cooperate with each other．Plus，students can learn to deal with success and failure through competition in the sports meeting，thus encouraging them to push themselves hard in their studies．（支持原因）
   However，20% of them hold the opposite view，arguing that sport is not the only way to keep healthy．What's worse，some of them might get injured in the sports meeting．Besides，taking part in the sports meeting will have a negative effect on their studies．（反對(duì)理由）
    As far as I'm concerned，it's a good choice to hold a sports meeting．For one thing，we can develop team spirit by participating in sports and games．For another，it's a good way of relaxing ourselves，making our school life colorful．（發(fā)表觀點(diǎn)）（高分句型二）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 該書(shū)面表達(dá)為圖表類(lèi)，通常都有一定的數(shù)據(jù)或者表格內(nèi)容作為寫(xiě)作參考和依據(jù)．考生應(yīng)細(xì)致觀察圖表內(nèi)容，用準(zhǔn)確的、簡(jiǎn)單明了的語(yǔ)言將圖表內(nèi)容表達(dá)清楚．另外，平時(shí)應(yīng)注意積累相應(yīng)短語(yǔ)和詞匯，以使得行文有更多的亮點(diǎn)．