Question

【題目】最近，高三年級組織的“你最重視哪科作業(yè)”的調(diào)查，結(jié)果見下面的餅狀圖。請據(jù)此寫一篇不少于150詞的英語短文。

寫作要求：

1.介紹調(diào)查結(jié)果；

2.闡述產(chǎn)生如此結(jié)果的原因，可舉例說明；

3.就如何合理分配各科作業(yè)時(shí)間提出自己的看法。

注意： 1.短文的開頭已為你寫好。

Recently, a survey on homework preference has been conducted among senior three students.

The results are as follows:

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Answer 1

【答案】Recently, a survey on homework preference has been conducted among senior three students.

The results are as follows: more than half of the students, about 54%, usually put their math homework in the first place while only 7% would rank Chinese as the most important. Meanwhile, English is regarded as most significant by 18% of the participants, and the other subjects attract the attention of 21% of the students.

Undoubtedly, the results reflect the position of each subject in Gaokao. As one of the fundamental subjects, math always comes first in all subjects. Besides, some students hold the view that math is most interesting and challenging, and it seems easier for us to have a sense exists of achievement in it. By contrast, some students, especially boys, find it hard to obtain immediate results when doing Chinese and English homework.

However, each subject has its unique charm and they are of the same value. Therefore, I think we should take every subject seriously and improve our studies in a balanced way.

【解析】本文書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求寫一篇調(diào)查報(bào)告。

第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，本篇是一篇調(diào)查報(bào)告：最近，高三年級組織的“你最重視哪科作業(yè)”的調(diào)查，結(jié)果見下面的餅狀圖。請據(jù)此寫一篇不少于150詞的英語短文。寫作要求：介紹調(diào)查結(jié)果；闡述產(chǎn)生如此結(jié)果的原因，可舉例說明；就如何合理分配各科作業(yè)時(shí)間提出自己的看法。

第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求確定關(guān)鍵詞，如：as follows（正如下面所示）；most significant（最有意義）；Undoubtedly,（毋容置疑）；of the same value（同樣的價(jià)值）；in a balanced way（用一種平衡的方法）等。

第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)語態(tài)問題。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。

本文內(nèi)容完整，語言規(guī)范，魚片連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。另外全文中沒有中國式英語的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語的能力。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】

本文是一篇看圖作文。內(nèi)容符合餅狀圖的含義，要點(diǎn)明確，結(jié)構(gòu)布局合理，文中使用高級詞匯和句子。more than half of the students, about 54%, usually put their math homework in the first place while only 7% would rank Chinese as the most importan句中使用while表示比較；English is regarded as most significant by 18% of the participants,句中使用被動語態(tài)；hold the view that math is most interesting and challenging, and it seems easier for us to have a sense exists of achievement in it 句中使用that引導(dǎo)的同位語從句；find it hard to obtain immediate results when doing Chinese and English homework.句中it做形式賓語，動詞不定式做真正的賓語；另外，as follows，Meanwhile, Undoubtedly, Besides, By contrast, However, Therefore等的運(yùn)用為文章增色添彩。