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2．11月的第四個(gè)星期四是感恩節(jié)．2012年的感恩節(jié)是11月22日．某英文雜志社要舉辦一次征文比賽活動(dòng)．活動(dòng)主題是："Learn to be grateful"．假如你叫魏來(lái)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列提示寫一篇120詞左右的短文投給該雜志社．
    主要內(nèi)容包括：
    1．為什么要感恩？
    2．對(duì)誰(shuí)感恩？
    3．感恩實(shí)際行動(dòng)（給父母泡一杯熱茶或給他們一個(gè)擁抱；給老師作感恩卡；給同學(xué)和朋友發(fā)短
信感謝他們的幫助…）
Learn to be grateful
    The Thanksgiving Day in this year is on November 22nd and．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提綱作文．根據(jù)所提供的材料信息，以"Learn to be grateful"為題寫一篇短文，寫作時(shí)人稱以第一和第二人稱為主，時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主．
寫作要點(diǎn)包括1．為什么要感恩？2．對(duì)誰(shuí)感恩？3．感恩實(shí)際行動(dòng)．
重點(diǎn)詞匯：share sth with sb （與某人分享某事）；a sense of responsibility （責(zé)任感）；be grateful to （感激，感謝）；take action （采取行動(dòng)）；so…that…（如此…以至于）；consist in （在于，存在于）；start with （從…開(kāi)始）．
高分句型：1．①Being grateful has always been a good quality in China，②which can inspire a sense of responsibility in us．
                  ①動(dòng)名詞短語(yǔ)在句中作主語(yǔ)，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞用單數(shù)形式；②which引導(dǎo)一個(gè)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，關(guān)心代詞which指代上文提到的這件事．
                 2．If everyone has got a grateful heart to our parents，teachers and friends，love and happiness will greet us everyday．
                  if引導(dǎo)條件狀語(yǔ)從句，從句用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，主句用一般將來(lái)時(shí)．
                 3．Gratitude is so important and necessary that we should take action right away．
                  這是"so+形容詞+that從句"結(jié)構(gòu)，that引導(dǎo)一個(gè)結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句．

解答 The Thanksgiving Day in this year is on November 22nd and it is around the corner．How shall we welcome it？Who shall we give our thanks to？I'd like to share my idea with you．
First，we should clarify why we are expected to learn to be grateful．Being grateful has always been a good quality in China，which can inspire a sense of responsibility in us（高分句型一）．And I always think if everyone is grateful to our society，it will be more harmonious．If everyone has got a grateful heart to our parents，teachers and friends，love and happiness will greet us everyday（高分句型二）．
Gratitude is so important and necessary that we should take action right away（高分句型三）．Gratitude doesn't necessarily consist in how much money we spend or how great our deeds should be．We can just start with small things-give our parents a warm hug or make them a cup of tea，design beautiful thank-you cards for our dear teachers and send thank-you emails to our friends etc．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 提綱作文在寫作時(shí)要注意內(nèi)容是否覆蓋了所給要點(diǎn)．寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，使得上下文意思連貫，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，使文章淺顯易懂，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次．