【題目】短文改錯(cuò)

假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請(qǐng)你修改你同學(xué)寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤,每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加:在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)),并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。

修改:在錯(cuò)的詞下面畫一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意:1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞;

2. 只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

Being responsible is actually not that difficult. I used think that it was hard to grow up into a responsible person. An incident happening in a rainy Sunday afternoon changed my attitude. I was on my way to the bookstore and was waiting for the green light when a girl was knocked down by a passing car, that drove off quickly. A man immediately gave her first aid and I had joined in it without hesitation. Soon many more help was given to the girl. Because we sent her to the nearest hospitals in time, she was able to receive properly treatment. Not badly injured, I expressed her gratitude to those giving help. Compared with the escaping driver, I was proud of what I did.

【答案】

【1】第一行 在used后加to

【2】第二行 in改為on

【3】第三行 第一個(gè)the改為a

【4】第四行 that改為which

【5】 去掉had

【6】第五行 many改為much

【7】第六行 hospitals改為hospital

【8】第六行 properly改為proper

【9】 I改為she

【10】第八行 escaping改為escaped

【解析】

【1】第一行 在used后加to 考查固定詞組。used to do sth.則表示過(guò)去常常,to后跟原形動(dòng)詞。故第一行在used后加to。

【2】第二行 in改為on 考查介詞。具體到某天應(yīng)該用on,文中是Sunday,故第二行in改為on。

【3】第三行 第一個(gè)the改為a 考查冠詞。bookstore是單數(shù)名詞,也不是特有名詞。故第三行 第一個(gè)the改為a

【4】第四行 that改為which 考查定語(yǔ)從句。that常用作關(guān)系代詞,可指代某人,也可指代某物,指物時(shí)有的時(shí)候可用which替換that,此處Which指代 a passing car。故that改為which

【5】 去掉had 考查時(shí)態(tài)。前文中g(shù)ave與joined并列。故 去掉had

【6】第五行 many改為much 考查名詞的單復(fù)數(shù)。此處的help是不可數(shù)名詞,應(yīng)該用much修飾。故第五行 many改為much。

【7】第六行 hospitals改為hospital 考查考查名詞的單復(fù)數(shù)。the nearest hospital最近的醫(yī)院只能有一個(gè),故第六行 hospitals改為hospital。

【8】第六行 properly改為proper 考查形容詞。Proper 修飾treatment,應(yīng)該用形容詞。故properly改為proper。

【9】 I改為she 考查句意理解。句意:她對(duì)那些給予幫助的人表示感謝。故第七行 I改為she

【10】第八行 escaping改為escaped 考查動(dòng)詞。此處指已經(jīng)逃跑的汽車,是過(guò)去式,應(yīng)該用過(guò)去分詞表示已經(jīng)發(fā)生的事情。故第八行 escaping改為escaped。

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