Question

【題目】假如你是李華，你們學(xué)校即將舉行英語戲劇節(jié)活動，你們班正為此排練節(jié)目A Midsummer Night’s Dream，遇到一些困難，請你給外教 Mr. Jones寫一封電子郵件尋求他的指導(dǎo)和幫助，要點如下：

1. 排練時間、地點;

2. 求助內(nèi)容。

注意:1. 字?jǐn)?shù)100字左右；

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

參考詞匯:排練 rehearsal

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mr. Jones,

I’m Li Hua. As you know, our school is organizing an English Drama Festival, for which our class is preparing a program named Midsummer Night’s Dream. However, we have encountered some difficulties, so I ask for your guidance and help.

First of all, our rehearsal is set on the afternoon of this Saturday in the school hall. Therefore I sincerely invite you to guide us in person. Originating from Shakespeare’s famous play, our program needs to truly reflect its content, but we don’t know much about Middle English which Shakespeare used in his work. That’s why we want you to give some guidance with your rich knowledge reserves and cultural background.

We really need your help. Please reply as soon as possible.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生寫一封郵件，就學(xué)校英語戲劇節(jié)活動排練節(jié)目事宜向外教尋求指導(dǎo)和幫助。

第一步：審題

體裁：應(yīng)用文

時態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時。

結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法

總分法指把主題句作為總說，把支持句作為分說，并以這種方式安排所寫內(nèi)容。

要求：1. 表達(dá)郵件目的

2. 排練節(jié)目相關(guān)

1）排練時間、地點

2）求助具體內(nèi)容

第二步:列提綱 （重點詞組）

rehearsal；English Drama Festival；program；difficulty；guidance；ask for；look forward to；invitation

第三步：連詞成句

1. Our school is about to hold an activity of English Drama Festival.

2. Our class is having a rehearsal but something is wrong with the program.

3. So I’m writing to ask for your guidance about it.

4. I wonder when and where we shall have the rehearsal together.

5. And I want your opinions about how we can deal with the present problems.

6. Looking forward to your reply.

根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）

1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對比關(guān)系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(從句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果關(guān)系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，

第五步：潤色修改