Question

【題目】短文改錯(cuò)(共10小題；每小題l分，滿分10分)

假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧)，并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫(huà)一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

注意：

1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

Smart phones had become part of our daily life. No matter who we are, we can see people busy play with their smart phones. Smart phones benefit them. They help us escape the pressures of life and get informations. However, if we spend too much time on them, we won’t have time to contact face to face our friends and family. And our life, study and work will hurt. In my view, we should limit to our using smart phones except for a purpose of learning. Meanwhile it’s absolute necessary for us to take part in more outdoors activities.

Answer 1

【答案】

Smart phones become part of our daily life. No matter we are, we can see people busy with their smart phones. Smart phones benefit . They help us escape the pressures of life and get . However, if we spend too much time on them, we won’t have time to contact face to face our friends and family. And our life, study and work will hurt. In my view, we should limit to our using smart phones except for purpose of learning. Meanwhile it’s necessary for us to take part in more activities.

【解析】

第一處：had→have。根據(jù)下文內(nèi)容可知，此處強(qiáng)調(diào)過(guò)去發(fā)生的動(dòng)作對(duì)現(xiàn)在造成的影響，故應(yīng)用現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)。

第二處：who→where。無(wú)論我們?cè)谀睦�，我們都能看到人們忙于玩他們的智能手機(jī)。根據(jù)句意可知，此處應(yīng)用where。no matter where引導(dǎo)讓步狀語(yǔ)從句。

第三處：play→playing。be busy doing sth. 是固定搭配，表示"忙于做某事"。

第四處：them→us。智能手機(jī)讓我們受益。根據(jù)上文中的"we"及下文中的"help us"可知此處應(yīng)用us。

第五處：informations→information。information是不可數(shù)名詞，沒(méi)有復(fù)數(shù)形式。

第六處：在hurt前加be。而且我們的生活、學(xué)習(xí)和工作會(huì)受到不良影響。hurt"對(duì)……有不良影響"是及物動(dòng)詞，與句子的主語(yǔ)our life， study and work之間是動(dòng)賓關(guān)系，故應(yīng)用被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)，加上be。

第七處：刪除to。limit是及物動(dòng)詞，其后直接跟賓語(yǔ)，故to多余。

第八處：a→the。for the purpose of是固定用法，表示"為了……"。

第九處：absolute→absolutely。同時(shí)，參加更多的戶外運(yùn)動(dòng)對(duì)我們來(lái)說(shuō)也是完全有必要的。修飾形容詞應(yīng)用副詞。

第十處：outdoors→outdoor。此處修飾的是名詞activities，應(yīng)用形容詞，而outdoors是副詞，故應(yīng)改為outdoor。