Question

【題目】 書面表達

本周你們班召開了一次主題班會“畢業(yè)前，我能為學校做些什么？”大家踴躍發(fā)言，作為第三小組成員，請你根據(jù)各小組的情況匯報以及你們小組的討論情況，寫一個總結(jié)交給老師。

第一小組	把我們用過的書本和學習用品贈送給七年級、八年級的弟弟妹妹， 尤其是家庭貧困的同學。
第二小組	籌錢，為學校圖書館購買書籍。
第三小組	......

提示詞： 贈送 present 用過的 used

注意：

1. 字數(shù)不少于80詞；

2. 補充好本小組討論情況；

3. 要點完整，層次清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫；

4. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實人名、地名、校名等。

What can you do for your school?

As we all know we will leave school in June. So this week our class hold a class meeting. We discussed about what we can do for our school. All of us gave our own ideas.

Answer 1

【答案】What can you do for your school?

As we all know we will leave school in June. So this week our class hold a class meeting. We discussed about what we can do for our school. All of us gave our own ideas. Students in Group 1 thought that we could present our used books and school things to the students in Grade 7 and Grade 8. Especially, we can give them to the poor students. They need our help. Students in Group 2 thought that we could raise our pocket money. The books in library are old and little. So we can use the money to buy some new books for the school library so that more students can get more and latest information from books. Students in Group 3 thought we can plant some plants and flowers in the school. That may make our school more beautiful. Anyway, we have studied here for three years, we love our school. We hope our school will be better and better and we should study hard and one day our school will be proud of us.

【解析】

本片書面表達要求學生寫出一個班會會后的總結(jié)。

這是一篇材料作文。表格中一個兩個組的討論結(jié)果，第三組是需要考生圍繞著主題自己補充的，盡量避免與前面兩組重復。我們可以按照總-分-總的結(jié)構(gòu)來寫。 首先引出此次班會的主題；其次分別寫出三個小組的討論結(jié)果；最后可以對三個小組進行總結(jié)，表達情感。在語言上要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時要賦予變化，這樣才可以更好的駕馭。同時也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個要點組織成一個完整的整體。