Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

假如你是英國交換生 Tom Green （15 歲，已在建湖生活了一年，會說中文），建湖圖書館正在招募英語志愿者，你希望成為其中一員，幫助小孩子學(xué)會閱讀英文原版繪本（English original picture books），你每周六有空參與志愿者活動。請依據(jù)下列圖表給工作人員寫一封 申請信。 注意：1、可以適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。 2、詞數(shù)100左右(開頭結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫 好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))；

Tom Green

personal information personal advantage personal promise

… English a book lover … Saturday …

Dear Sir/Madam,

I’m an exchange student from the UK.

Yours

Sincerely

Tom Green

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,

I'm an exchange student from the UK, I am writing to you about volunteering in your library. My name is Tom Green, I am a boy of fifteen. I’ve lived in Jianhu for about a year.

As an exchange student, I'm good at English and I can also speak Chinese well. I’m a book lover, In my free time, I like to read all kinds of books. Besides, I'm warm-hearted and always ready to help others, so I think I’d be good at this job.

I’d like to help kids learn to read English original picture books. I will enjoy sharing my ideas with children who come to the library. I can work once a week, I am free to help on Saturdays.

I really want to join you, please give me the chance, thank you very much! I’m looking forward to your reply!

Yours Sincerely

Tom Green

【解析】

這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如from the UK，write to sb.，a boy of fifteen，live in，like to do，all kinds of，be good at，be ready to help others，I’d like to，enjoy doing，once a week，join sb.，look forward to等。而并列句My name is Tom Green, I am a boy of fifteen /As an exchange student, I'm good at English and I can also speak Chinese well.和復(fù)雜從句結(jié)構(gòu)Besides, I'm warm-hearted and always ready to help others, so I think I’d be good at this job./ At first, I got so nervous that I felt awful all over./I hope I can be a good doctor, so I can cure my patients and release them from painful diseases./ The person I admire most is Lei Feng.的運(yùn)用，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理。