Question

假設(shè)TV Guide外文版將刊登文章介紹湖南電視臺熱播的電視節(jié)目“爸爸去哪兒”(Dad, Where Are We Going?)，上周五你看過一期。請據(jù)此寫一篇80詞左右的英文觀后感。內(nèi)容提示如下：
1. 節(jié)目由5個(gè)明星爸爸和他們的孩子主演，深受各年齡段的人喜愛；
2. 目的是鼓勵(lì)親子雙方重視交流，對于人們有良好的影響；
3. 爸爸們以前沒有時(shí)間陪孩子，現(xiàn)在已學(xué)會(huì)如何悉心照顧孩子；
4. 觀后感想。
注意：
1. 觀后感須包括所給內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，要點(diǎn)語句通順、意思連貫；
2. 第4要點(diǎn)的內(nèi)容須用2-3句話展開合理想象，作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
3. 觀后感的開頭已在答題卷上給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
The program Dad, Where Are We Going? is one of this year’s hottest TV programs. I saw it last Friday.
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Answer 1

The program Dad Where Are We Going? Is one of this year’s hottest TV programs.I saw it last Friday.Five star fathers and their children play the lead roles in the program.It is popular among people of all ages.The aim of the program is to encourage parents and children to play attention to the communication.It has a good effect on people.Before fathers had no time for children. Now they have learned how to take good care of their children.I think this TV program is very meaningful.We should be brave to deal with problems.

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫作要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，然后圍繞要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容，可知本文主要是第三人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)進(jìn)行敘述。語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少。如:pay attentionto注意；have effect on對……有影響；take care of照顧，關(guān)心等。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用, 讓文章更出彩。