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6．你校學(xué)生會(huì)以"初三學(xué)生要不要參加春游活動(dòng)"為題，向初三學(xué)生作調(diào)查．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表所出示的調(diào)查結(jié)果，以"Whether or Not Should Junior 3Students Go Spring Outing？"為題寫一篇短文，上交學(xué)生會(huì)．

65%的學(xué)生認(rèn)為應(yīng)該春游	35%的學(xué)生認(rèn)為不應(yīng)該春游	你的觀點(diǎn)：有很多其他活動(dòng)無法比擬的優(yōu)勢(shì)
1．親近自然，感受淙淙的水聲和颯颯的風(fēng)聲	1．有太多的作業(yè)要做	1…．
2．給身心帶來安寧	2．春游就是浪費(fèi)時(shí)間	2…．

注意：1、詞數(shù)90左右，開頭
已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
2、必須包括所有要點(diǎn)，不要逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫、通順．
Whether or Not Should Junior 3Students Go Spring Outing？
We have had a heated discussion on whether Junior 3students should go spring outing，
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Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
They think they have too much homework to do and it's a waste of time．他們認(rèn)為他們有太多的家庭作業(yè)要做，這是浪費(fèi)時(shí)間．  這是一個(gè)賓語從句，They think是主句，后面的是賓語從句．
高分句型二
 We can feel relaxed if we go spring outing．如果我們?nèi)ゴ河危�我們�?huì)感到輕松． 這是if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句，如果…．

解答 Whether or Not Should Junior 3 Students Go Spring Outing？
We have had a heated discussion on whether Junior 3 students should go spring outing.65% of the students think they should go spring outing．Because they can be close to nature．They can also feel the running water and the blowing wind．It can also bring peace to their mind and body．【要點(diǎn)一，贊成春游的原因】However，35% of the students don't agree．They think they have too much homework to do and it's a waste of time．【高分句型一，注意賓語從句的使用】【要點(diǎn)二，不贊成春游的原因】I think going spring outing has many advantages．We can feel relaxed if we go spring outing．【高分句型二，注意if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句的使用】We can also achieve a balance between work and rest．【要點(diǎn)三，自己的觀點(diǎn)】

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