Question

12．假如你們學(xué)校展開"大量農(nóng)民進(jìn)城"是好還是壞的大討論，請你根據(jù)下面表格中的內(nèi)容提示，寫一篇不少于80詞的英語短文，開頭已給出（不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)），可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．

樂觀者的觀點(diǎn)	會使農(nóng)民更富有；城市更美好；國家更富強(qiáng)
擔(dān)心者的觀點(diǎn)	留守兒童增多，孩子缺少父母關(guān)愛，對他們的教育出現(xiàn)問題
你自己的觀點(diǎn)	…

參考詞匯：left-behind children 留守兒童
A large number of farmers leave the countryside to search for work in the cities．Is it good or bad？We had a discussion at our school and here are the results．
Some think that farmers can help to make cities more beautiful and make our country stronger．Working in cities can make farmers richer．Others think that too many farmers go into the cities and they leave many left-behind children at home．Their parents care about them less and it's a serious problem to teach them．
I think that farmers leave the countryside to search for work in the cities is not a bad thing．But we shouldtake actionto help to deal with their problems about their family and their children's education．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
Some students think that farmers can help make cities more beautiful and make our country stronger．
句中"that farmers can help make cities more beautiful and make our country stronger"為賓語從句．句中短語有："help do sth 幫助做某事"、"make sb/sth+形容詞 使…怎么樣"．這句話意為：一些學(xué)生認(rèn)為農(nóng)民可以幫助城市變得更漂亮，國家更富強(qiáng)．
高分句型二：
But we should take action to help deal with their problems about their family and their children's education．
句中使用短語有："take action to do sth 采取行動做某事"、"help do sth 幫助做某事"、"deal with 處理"．這句話意為：但是我們應(yīng)該采取行動幫助他們解決家人問題和孩子的教育問題．

解答 A large number of farmers leave the countryside to search for work in the cities．Is it good or bad？We had a discussion at our school and here are the results．（開篇點(diǎn)題）
Some students think that farmers can help make cities more beautiful and make our country stronger．【高分句型一】Working in cities can make farmers richer．Others think that too many farmers go into the cities and they leave many left-behind children at home．Their parents care about them less and it's a serious problem to teach them．（討論結(jié)果）
I think that farmers leave the countryside to search for work in the cities is not a bad thing．But we should take action to help deal with their problems about their family and their children's education．【高分句型二】（我的觀點(diǎn)）

點(diǎn)評 寫作文時(shí)要注意平時(shí)語言的積累，避免出現(xiàn)語法錯(cuò)誤，寫作時(shí)注意條理清楚，語意通暢．