Question

假如你是中央氣象臺(tái)主持人，現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行早間天氣預(yù)報(bào)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列信息寫(xiě)一段臺(tái)詞播報(bào)我國(guó)部分主要城市今天的天氣情況。要求：語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)潔、準(zhǔn)確；播報(bào)有序；詞數(shù)不少于60。

城市名稱(chēng)	天氣情況	溫度	建議	備注
北京	多云	9℃~14℃
海爾濱	有雨		出門(mén)最好帶傘	東北部城市
上海	有風(fēng)	12℃~17℃
廣州	晴朗		適合旅行

Good morning! It's 7 o'clock. Here's the weather report for some big cities in China.
                                                                       
                                                                       
                                                                       
                                                                       
                                                                       
                           

Answer 1

Good morning! It's 7 o'clock. Here's the weather report for some big cities in China. Beijing is cloudy. The temperature is between nine and fourteen degrees. There will be rain in Harbin and other northeast cities. It's better to take an umbrella to go out. It's windy in Shanghai and other east cities. The temperature is between twelve and seventeen degrees. It's sunny in Guangzhou. It's the best time to travel.
That's the weather report for today. Thank you for listening !

試題分析：
這是一篇給材料作文，介紹我國(guó)北京、哈爾濱、上海和廣州的天氣以及適宜的活動(dòng)。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)，人稱(chēng)為第三人稱(chēng)單數(shù)，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如：There will be……，It's……及The temperature is……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用數(shù)詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫(xiě)作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，注意文后要表達(dá)感謝。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開(kāi)頭介紹了時(shí)間，接下來(lái)介紹北京、哈爾濱、上海和廣州的天氣以及適宜人們的活動(dòng)，最后指出總結(jié)并表示感謝。此處用了between nine and fourteen degrees、go out、 the best time to等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。