Question

你是我校九年級學生，在畢業(yè)典禮上，你將對自己三年來與同學相處，從中學到許多知識和做人道理，自己將努力工作實現夢想等情況，表達自己對老師和同學感激之情，寫一篇英語發(fā)言稿。以下提示詞可能對你有所幫助。
excited, happy,  It’s hard for sb to do sth, It’s kind of sb to do sth,  in the pass three years,
together, like, have fun, learn---from, succeed, study hard, graduation, keep on, achieve one’s dream, forget, last, ,forever, friendship.
Good morning, everyone,
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             
That’s all, Thank you

Answer 1

Good morning,everyone,
It’s my honor to talk with all of you here.I feel so excited and so happy to speak here. It’s hard for me to believe that I’m leaving my dear teachers and classmates. It’s very kind of you to help me a lot. In the past three years,we have studied and lived together like a happy family. We have had fun together,too. I’ve learned a lot from you all. I have also learned that if I want to succeed, I must study hard first.After graduation,I will keep on working hard to achieve my dreams.I’ll never forget you.I hope our friendship will last forever.
That’s all, Thank you.

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，本文已經給出了主要寫作要點，動筆前要先認真閱讀要點，然后圍繞要點適當發(fā)揮。寫作中，應注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內容利用上；結合材料內容，可知本文主要是第三人稱，一般過去及現在時態(tài)進行敘述。語言的表述應該符合語法的結構，造句應該符合英語的表達習慣。適當使用連詞，做到上下文聯系緊密，符合邏輯關系。
【亮點說明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少。如:it is adj for doing sth/to do sth做某事怎么樣；have fun玩得開心；keep on doing sth堅持做某事等。學習中注意總結,牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當引用, 讓文章更出彩。