Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)（計(jì) 15 分）

請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下交通事故因素（factors）統(tǒng)計(jì)圖表，以“Major causes of traffic accidents” 為題，用英語寫一篇簡短的分析報(bào)告，向?qū)W校英語報(bào)投 稿。

注意：

1. 報(bào)告需逐條陳述下面 pie chart 和 bar chart (柱狀圖) 中呈現(xiàn)的主 要內(nèi)容。（至少 5 點(diǎn)）

2. 提出你對(duì)交通安全總的看法。（至少 2 點(diǎn)）

3. 詞數(shù)：100 詞左右，所給標(biāo)題不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

Major Causes of Traffic Accidents

Nowadays, there are always kinds of traffic accidents reports from newspaper, TV news and so on. As a result, it’s important for us to analyze the major causes. The following are two reports:

According to the pie chart, there are mainly three factors:85% is about driver factors; 5% is from vehicle factors and 10% is environment factors. Among them, it’s quite clear that the first one is holds 15%, tired driving which is 25% as well as not using seat-belt which is 25%.

In my opinion, everyone should keep in mind that traffic safety is one of the most ways in our life. At the same time, we should try our best to obey the traffic rules. The harder we try, the happier our life will be!

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給圖表作文，根據(jù)圖表顯示介紹交通安全事故發(fā)生的因素以及自己的觀點(diǎn)。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為第三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：There are……， it is important for sb to do sth, it’s quite clear that……, everyone should……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，注意要切題，思路清晰。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了交通安全事故頻發(fā)，接下來介紹兩個(gè)表格，表格一：駕駛員因素 85%，交通因素 5%，環(huán)境因素 10%。，表格二：超速 50%，酒駕 15%，疲勞駕駛 25%，不系安全帶 25%。最后表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)：要有交通安全意識(shí)，要遵守交通規(guī)則。此處as a result, in my opinion, keep in mind, at the same time, try one’s best to do sth, the+形容詞比較級(jí)， the +形容詞比較級(jí)等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。