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【題目】為了進(jìn)一步增強(qiáng)中學(xué)生的安全意識， 提高自我保護(hù)能力，某校開展了以“安全”為主題的英語演講比賽。請你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示寫一篇演講稿。

注意：1.詞數(shù): 80個(gè)左右（開頭已給出的內(nèi)容不記入總詞數(shù)）；

2.內(nèi)容必須包括上表中的要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

3.條理清楚、語句連貫，語法正確，書寫規(guī)范；

4．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的地名、校名和人名。

參考詞匯：be careful make friends on line be in danger call…for help go bad (變質(zhì))

Dear friends,

As teenagers, we should always keep safety in mind. But how can we keep? Here are some of my suggestions. First,

That’s all. Thank you for your listening.

Answer 1

【答案】Dear friends,

As teenagers, we should always keep safety in mind. But how can we keep? Here are some of my suggestions. First, we should be careful when we make friends, especially on line. Second, if we are in danger, we must call the police for help in time so that we keep ourselves safe. Third, we should eat healthily and safely. We shouldn’t eat too much junk food. And we shouldn’t eat the food that goes bad. It’s bad for our health. Also, summer is coming, and we must remember it’s dangerous to swim in the river. We should follow the traffic rules when we want to cross the street. What's more, we should look around first when we are crossing the street. Then we can cross streets safely.

That’s all. Thank you for your listening.

【解析】試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，給出了四個(gè)寫作要點(diǎn)。這四個(gè)要點(diǎn)構(gòu)成寫作的基本框架。我們要做的就是用正確的英語把要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮想象說出自己的觀點(diǎn)。動筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)來寫，要注意主謂一致等問題。寫作中要適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。