Question

13．在你的成長(zhǎng)過程中，父親會(huì)給你的一生帶來很大的影響，請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格中的提示向讀者介紹你的父親，具體要求如下：
1．要點(diǎn)齊全，而且有適當(dāng)拓展，但不得逐字翻譯；
2．條理清晰，語意連貫，字跡工整．
3．詞數(shù)90 左右．

My Father
年齡外貌	四十多歲；中等身材
興趣愛好	興趣廣泛，尤喜閱讀；最愛藍(lán)色，因?yàn)椤?/TD>
性格特點(diǎn)	精力充沛，富有條理；　充滿愛心，樂于助人
給我?guī)椭?/TD>	悉心照料；傾聽心聲；
我的認(rèn)識(shí)	良師益友，…

My father has influenced me a lot since I was born．       ．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
 Blue is his favorite color because it can bring him peace and make him calm down when he feels worried藍(lán)色是他最喜歡的顏色，因?yàn)樗�能給他帶來平靜，使他感到沮喪時(shí)平靜下來．這是because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句，因?yàn)椤��?br />高分句型二
I think he is not only my good teacher but also my good friend我認(rèn)為他不僅是我的好老師，也是我的好朋友，這是一個(gè)賓語從句，I think 是主句，后面的是賓語從句，not only …but also不僅…而且．

解答 My father has influenced me a lot since I was born．He is neither too tall nor too short and has a lot of interests，especially reading．Blue is his favorite color because it can bring him peace and make him calm down when he feels worried【高分句型一，注意狀語從句的使用】．He is energetic and organized．He also has a heart full of love．He often helps others in need．【要點(diǎn)一，年齡外貌，興趣愛好和性格特點(diǎn)】．
He takes good care of me and can listen to my worries and happiness patiently．【要點(diǎn)二，給我?guī)椭��?br />I think he is not only my good teacher but also my good friend．【高分句型二，注意賓語從句的使用】I love him very much．【要點(diǎn)三，我的認(rèn)識(shí)】

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本篇寫作需注意要求中所提供的要點(diǎn)，不可遺漏．需在平時(shí)積累相關(guān)的詞匯，寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系．上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞．如but，so，then等．