Question

18．假如你是李華，你的筆友Jim最近沉溺于玩電腦游戲，為此你很擔心，請根據(jù)下表提示給Jim 寫一封信，談談你的看法及建議．

Jim 過去	功課好，積極參加學校的各項活動．
Jim 現(xiàn)在	對學習沒興趣，上課不專心，不按時交作業(yè)．
你的看法	玩電腦游戲可能使你放松，但…
你的建議	（至少發(fā)揮兩點）

要求：1．詞數(shù)70左右．2．要點完整，層次清楚，語法正確．
Dear Jim，
I really feel worried about you．
You used to do well in your lessons and took an active part in the activities at school．But now you are so crazy about computer games that you have no interest in your schoolwork and don't listen to the teachers as carefully as before in class．Also，you can't hand in your homework on time．
Perhaps playing computer games can make you fell relaxed，but if you spend too much time on it，you will have less time to study．And it may do harm to your health．For example，it can hurt your eyes and neck．
I hope you should achieve a balance between your schoolwork and your hobbies．Why not join in some outdoor activities when you feel bored？As your friend，I'll be glad to share your happiness and sadness．
Best wishes．
Yours
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇給材料作文，寫一封信，向吉姆提出建議．本文已經給出了主要寫作要點，動筆前要先認真閱讀要點，然后圍繞要點適當發(fā)揮．寫作中，應注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內容利用上；結合材料內容，可知本文主要是第一二人稱，主要用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)進行敘述．語言的表述應該符合語法的結構，造句應該符合英語的表達習慣．適當使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關系．
高分句型：
①Perhaps playing computer games can make you feel relaxed，but if you spend too much time on it，you will have less time to study．也許玩電腦游戲可以讓你感覺輕松，但是如果你花太多的時間在它上，你將有更少的時間學習．句子中make sb do sth表示讓某人做某事；if引導條件狀語從句，主句用一般將來時，從句用一般現(xiàn)在時．
②Why not join in some outdoor activities when you feel bored．當你感到無聊的時候為什么不參加一些戶外活動呢？句子中why not表示為什么不，后面跟動詞原形；when引導一個時間狀語從句．

解答 Dear Jim，
I really feel worried about you．（引出話題）You used to do well in your lessons and took an active part in the activities at school．But now you are so crazy about computer games that you have no interest in your schoolwork and don't listen to the teachers as carefully as before in class．Also，you can't hand in your homework on time．（介紹過去與現(xiàn)在對學習的態(tài)度）
Perhaps playing computer games can make you feel relaxed，but if you spend too much time on it，you will have less time to study（高分句型）．And it may do harm to your health．For example，it can hurt your eyes and neck．（電腦游戲的優(yōu)缺點）
I hope you should achieve a balance between your schoolwork and your hobbies．Why not join in some outdoor activities when you feel bored（高分句型）？As your friend，I'll be glad to share your happiness and sadness．（建議）
Best wishes．
Yours，
Li Hua

點評 這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少．如used to sth過去常常做某事；takepart in參加；as…as…和…一樣；hand in上交；on time按時；do harm to傷害；why not do sth為什么不做某事等．學習中注意總結，牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當引用，讓文章更出彩．