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【題目】隨著經(jīng)濟（economy）快速發(fā)展，越來越多的人買得起車了，私家車不再僅僅屬于富人。然而越來越多的私家車給人們的生活帶來了怎樣的影響呢？請以“私家車Private cars 的利與弊”為主題寫一篇作文。

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可以節(jié)省時間，不必花費時間等公交車； 使旅行變得更容易，享受沿途美麗的風景； ……	私家車的數(shù)量變多，浪費能源； 由于駕駛員的粗心，事故頻發(fā)； 改變了健康的生活方式，寧愿開車也不…
說說你自己的看法……

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With the development of economy, more and more people can afford to buy the cars. ……

Answer 1

【答案】Private cars have many advantages. People can save time.They don't need to spend much time waiting for the bus. Private cars make it easier for people to traval. They can enjoy the beautiful views on the road. People can go anywhere any time. Private cars also have a lot of disadvantages. First, the number of private cars is becoming larger.They waste much energgy. Second, more accidents have happened because of the drivers' carelessness. Third, they change people's healthy lifestyle. Many people would rather drive their cars than walk.
In my opinion, we can ride bikes to school and to work. Riding is a good way to keep healthy. Bikes don't produce pollution either. Riding a bike is even faster than driving in the rush hour.
【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，介紹私家車的利與弊。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：People can……，Private cars also have……，the number of private cars is…….，Many people would rather……，we can……，Riding a bike is……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。