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【題目】書面表達。當今許多家長不僅要求孩子刻苦學(xué)習功課，而且還要求他們學(xué)習諸如音樂、舞蹈、書法、美術(shù)、棋類等各種特長，希望孩子未來能更成功。對此現(xiàn)象的利弊、得失眾說紛紜。請你根據(jù)下面提示要點寫一篇短文并簡單表明自己的觀點。益處：發(fā)展多種技能,培養(yǎng)多種愛好, 豐富生活；開闊視野，完善自我；增加就業(yè)機會。弊端：孩子自我支配時間少；壓力更大；加重家庭經(jīng)濟負擔等。你的觀點： ……
注意：1).不少于100詞；短文的開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。
2).參考詞匯：enrich 豐富 broaden 開闊 horizon視野
Many parents are trying to find tutors to teach their children special skills such as music, dancing, calligraphy, painting, chess and so on,

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【答案】Many parents are trying to find tutors to teach their children special skills such as music, dancing, calligraphy, painting, chess and so on, hoping they'll become more successful in the future.

Learning special skills can help children develop both different skills and many interests, which can enrich their lives.At the same time, they can broaden their horizons and improve themselves.Besides, they will be more likely to get good jobs in the future.

However, life is hard for these children, who have to spend much time practicing the skills.They hardly have their own time to do what they want.Also, they have to suffer more pressure. What's worse , their families have to pay more money for their learning.

Different children have different interests and they do need time to relax.So I think parents should let children do what they're interested in.Only in this way can they enjoy a happy life.

【解析】本文要求說明學(xué)生參加各種興趣特長班的利弊，這種題型往往要求先說明一下現(xiàn)狀，再對比事物本身的利弊，有時也會單從一個角度（利或弊）出發(fā)，最后往往要求考生表明自己的態(tài)度（或?qū)κ挛锴熬疤岢鲱A(yù)測）。就本文而言，要求根據(jù)提示就家長對孩子從小的過度要求，害怕孩子輸在起跑線上這一現(xiàn)象寫出益處、弊端以及自己的個人觀點，所以在謀篇布局上可以用三個段落來分別講述這三方面內(nèi)容；此外，作文提示的益處和弊端涉及的內(nèi)容較多，為了避免內(nèi)容混亂應(yīng)當在論述時恰當使用表示順序的詞匯，比如first; second; at last ；one the one hand , one the other hand ; for one thing ; for another thing 等。在時態(tài)方面，因為這是一篇論述社會現(xiàn)象的文章，可以使用一般現(xiàn)在時。要注意詞匯的選擇運用及句式的多變，以提升文章的檔次。