Question

Writing 6( 2015 山西)

某校開展“我 是課堂小主人” 建 議征集活動，各班 就此展開討論，同 學(xué)們紛紛發(fā)言：“我希望能有足夠的自主學(xué)習(xí)時(shí)間……”“我喜歡的課堂是每人 都有一臺筆記本電腦，方便上網(wǎng)查詢……”“課上我們能自由地 討論，充分展示我們的學(xué)習(xí)成果……”等。請你結(jié)合同學(xué)們討論 的結(jié)果，給校長以電子郵件的形式寫一封信，建議什么樣的課堂更為同學(xué)們喜愛，也更有利于同學(xué)們未來的發(fā)展。內(nèi)容須包括以下要點(diǎn)：

. What is your favorite class like?

. Please tell us an unforgettable experience youVe had in your class.

. Please give at least two suggestions.

要求：1. 同數(shù)80詞左右，提示詞僅供參考；

2. 郵件的格式已給出，開頭、結(jié)尾不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名。

Dear Mr. Li，

     

                          Best wishes, 

                         Zhang Hua

Answer 1

Writing 6

[寫作提示]

1. 本文屬于記敘與議論相結(jié)合的文章，主要時(shí)態(tài)為一般過去時(shí)和 一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。

2. 內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：

(1) 你最喜歡的課堂是什么樣的；

(2) 你曾經(jīng)有過的課堂上的一次難忘的經(jīng)歷；

(3) 你給校長的關(guān)于課堂形式的至少兩條建議。

[參考范文]

Dear Mr.Li,

    My favorite class is an open and free class where I can learn by myself and discuss in groups,which is good for my development,I think.

    I still remember an unforgettable experience in my maths class. Several days ago I spent a long time working on three maths problems in class,but it was too hard for me to work them out.So I had to ask my classmates for help. After a considerable discussion,we solved the problems in our group. How excited I was!

    Having such a great experience,I want to give two suggestions.Firstly,please don't teach us too much in class. We need about 30 minutes to learn by ourselves and work in groups every class. Secondly,please provide us with some laptops if possible,so we can surf the Internet easily.No doubt,we need an open and free class,you see.

    That's all.Thank you.

                        Best wishes,

                         Zhang Hua