Question

Writing 5 (2015江蘇蘇州外國語學(xué)校二模)

    今年春節(jié)聯(lián)歡晚會(huì)上，很多人加 入了搶紅包活動(dòng)，但也有人表示擔(dān) 憂。假如你叫李華，你班最近開展了 一個(gè)有關(guān)搶紅活動(dòng)的調(diào)查。請你 用英文給學(xué)校校刊《英語園地》寫一 封信，介紹此次調(diào)查的結(jié)果并談?wù)勀愕挠^點(diǎn)。

注意：1. 文中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；

2. 語言通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；

3. 間數(shù):90詞左右，信件的開頭與結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總 詞數(shù)。

參考詞匯:搶紅包grabbing red packets 

Dear Editor,

    I am writing to tell you about the survey on the activity of “Grabbing red packets” in our class.

                                            Yours sincerely,

                                                 Li Hua

Answer 1

Writing 5

[寫作提示]

1. 審題：

這是一篇應(yīng)用文中的書信。主體時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。

2. 確定要點(diǎn)：

(1) 約70%的學(xué)生參加搶紅包活動(dòng)。

(2) 約75%贊成者的觀點(diǎn)：

① 帶來更多樂趣；

② 結(jié)識(shí)更多的朋友；

③ ……(自擬1點(diǎn)) 。

(3) 約25%擔(dān)憂者的觀點(diǎn)：

① 花費(fèi)太多的時(shí)間；

② 和家人交流少；

③ ……(自擬1點(diǎn)) 。

(4) 你的觀點(diǎn)。

[參考范文]

Dear Editor,

    I am writing to tell you about the survey on the activity of Grabbing red packets” in our class. About 70% of the students took part in the activity in my class. About 15% of them think it can bring them more fun and they can make more friends.Also,they can get some money.However,about 25% of them are worried about the activity.They say some people spend too much time grabbing red packets.Moreover,they don't have enough communication with their family members.As a result,they may feel a little lonely.

    I think this activity is really exciting,but we should spend more time communicating with our family members.

                                            Yours sincerely,

                                                 Li Hua